#Roast my Gaming video

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steady estuary
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How do I link the vid lol

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Roast my Gaming video

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-how's the pacing
-where do you get bored
-what do you not understand as a new viewer
-what might prompt you to click off
-would you watch this if it was on your homepage

stuck quarry
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i will sound harsh...but technically.

  • weird
  • ~10sec
  • nothing
  • no clear understanding what hapening
  • no
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when you're growing and making content for new viewers , work on topic+idea+hook. Package it into good thumb + title and videos will work :)

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breakdown as "new viewer" :
0 sec. - some agressive high bpm music hits with a lot of stroboscope effects that probably will make epileptic guys blow up.
2 sec. - it switches into chill + you, so i want to know, whats happening...
4 sec. - without explanation "I will do it on normal"
so...
I don't know what's happening and you'll do it on normal and not like "uber hard challenge" etc.

steady estuary
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I'm at a loss of words, I thought this was my best video and this information is just what I needed (I was thinking something was wrong with the video but couldn't pinpoint)

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It's always good seeing a new perspective, always welcome to hear constructive criticism

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Thanks Agent 👍