#Hypixel just added enderman to bedwars and there OP
edgy hearth
fading tide
I actually really like the thumbnail. I heard some overlap in the audio while watching but I think you have amazing potential as a creator
Also the fart sound effect and animation felt unnecessary. But the intro was actually really good, especially the part where you jump to a video of you fireballing the beds since that builds action. I think the hook would've performed better if you showed footage of the endermen doing their thing at the start though. Also some more talking in the background explaining how it works or hooking the viewer for possibilities of how you're going to use it would make the video more entertaining.
Your use of music is very very good though. I think more sound and camera effects would help though.
I think honestly your main concern is that you don't talk that much while playing so try building on that skill.
Final thing I want to touch up on VERY IMPORTANT: You used the wrong "there" in the title which makes your video seem less professional. The right one is "they're".
I can tell by your voice that you're young as well which is fine, and if anything I think it makes your content stand out. Also you're really smart for choosing to make a video on enderman being added to the game because you might be one of the first creators to make a vid on it. Keep grinding though. I've never seen a kid this good at YouTube, just keep learning, and use the fact that you're young to your advantage since it is really unique.
I think you should do more sb content as well. I would love to see a video where you do some sort of challenge in sb thats never been seen before, kind of like how one guy did the chaos profile.
edgy hearth
yea thanks so much for the help and yea I will add of the things you said or atleast try my hardest and sorry for taking so long mb