#i feel like it’s not good but i’m not sure

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novel kayak
reef dirge
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What's the video title?

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I like the facial expressions and contrasting text colours, but the backgrounds of both images are so busy and detract from the foreground subject and text. I would suggest that you fade out the background with a blur effect or transparent overlay

frosty shard
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I think something like that could work too just for inspiration.
I removed unnecessary details (Logos) to simplify the image, blured the background..

reef dirge
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@frosty shard do you mind sending me the file? I'd like to mess around with it and see if I can make it better

frosty shard
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I didn't save it, sorry. Just download the picture, that's what I did too 🫠

plain iris
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The background is too bright and doesn't contrast well with the words. Try changing the colour of the text, it might work

paper vapor
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I would also like more closeup shot, you guys could be clsoer, bigger so we can see what's in your hand

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Also yeah if the background is less bright, there'd be more contrast and it would defo pop more

plain iris
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Its also just very noisy in the background. I would personally be more likely to click on it if it was just a plain white background.

tame gate
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make the devideing line glow or something

novel kayak
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sorry im just getting back , thank you guys so much for the feedback

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would you guys mind watching it?