#ROAST (INCREASE CONVERSION RATE WITH ONLY FB ADS?)

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fierce isle
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ROAST MY THUMBNAIL! THANK YOU

fast raft
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The first thing I see is way too much text.. it’s late for me and I need some sleep so more explanation tomorrow 😅 also you are a bit dark, you should make your side of the thumbnail a bit brighter. I like the Facebook logos, they instantly indicate what the video is about, I think that’s one reason you don’t need to write Facebook as big. Someone else will probably come up with great text for the thumbnail, I’ll contribute my part tomorrow. Good night 👋

fierce isle
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@fast raft thank you for the feedback

spark spade
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Agreed with @fast raft there’s just so much text you might as well leave the title blank! Now idk what your title is, but I imagine is the same as the thumbnail. No need to write the same thing twice. I suck at thumbnails, so let me give you an example of someone who has done this right...

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I'm not saying to just copy him, but look at how simplistic this thumbnail looks!
The person, the phone, the background

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This video was published over a year ago but it has over 1M views btw

fierce isle
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@spark spade yes, I agree, I am keeping the text off my thumbnails moving forward. It's redundant. The goal of the thumbnail is to get attention and then the title tells them what the video is about so it doesn't make sense to have so much text.

spark spade
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Yeah! Text on thumbnails is not bad tho, you just gotta be strategic about it