Looking for both if the army is legal and the points are added up correctly, and if anything is too obnoxious, and what to do with the remaining 250pts. My initial thoughts are either two more tactical squads just like the others. Or maybe shaving some more to fit in predators or sicarans, probably a pair of predators then kitting out the sabres.
Legion Praetor with Shamshir jetbike, cyberhawk, MC thunderhammer, paragon blade: 230pts
Stormseer on spatha combat bike with force staff (needs to take power weapon for this): 140pts
Chaplain with MC power glaive and combat shield: 115pts
Golden Keshig squadron, 6 strong, vexilla, sergeant has thunder hammer: 295pts
Ebon Keshig cohort of 9: 360pts
Legion contemptor dreadnought talon, 2 strong, each with gravis melta and chainfist: 380pts
Apothecary artificer armour: 55pts
10 man tactical squad, sergeant has artificer armour and power glaive: 125pts
10 man tactical squad, sergeant has artificer armour and power glaive: 125pts
20 man despoiler squad, vexilla, 4 power lances, sergeant has power glaive and artificer armour: 255pts
3 man outrider squadron: 85pts
Legion sabre strike squadron of 2 with volkite: 150pts
Xiphon with ramjet: 145pts
Leviathan dreadnought with melta and siege claw: 290pts
2750pts total
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