#2k narrative attempt

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tepid storm
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++ 1. Crusade Force Organisation Chart (LA - X: Iron Hands) [2,000Pts] ++

  • Expanded Army Lists +

Expanded Army List Profiles:: Exemplary Units On, Legacy Units On

  • Allegiance: +

Allegiance: Loyalist

X: Iron Hands

  • Rite of War: +

Rite of War: Company Of Bitter Iron (IH)

  • HQ: +

Centurion, Cataphractii [145Pts]: Stoic Defender, Warlord

. Delegatus: Bitter Duty (Company of Bitter Iron), Cataphractii Terminator Armour, Combi-Bolter, Cyber-Familiar, Thunder Hammer
. Delegatus

Morlock Terminator Squad [560Pts]

. 1) Augmentor: Cyber-Familiar, Power Fist, Volkite Culverin
. 2) Morlock: Legion Standard, Power Fist
. 2) Morlock: Power Fist, Volkite Charger
. 2) Morlock: Power Fist, Volkite Charger
. 2) Morlock: Power Fist, Volkite Charger
. Land Raider Proteus Carrier: Searchlights, Twin-linked Lascannon

  • Elites: +

Contemptor Dreadnought Talon [185Pts]

. Contemptor Dreadnought: Combi-Bolter, Gravis Plasma Cannon, Gravis Power Fist with in-built ranged weapon

Contemptor Dreadnought Talon [180Pts]

. Contemptor Dreadnought: Combi-Bolter, Gravis Melta Cannon, Gravis Power Fist with in-built ranged weapon

  • Troops: +

Medusan Immortal Squad [390Pts]

. Immortal Sergeant: Artificer Armour, Graviton Pistol, Power Fist
. 11x Immortal w/Bolter: 11x Bolter
. Immortal w/Heavy Weapon (1 in 5): Graviton Shredder
. Immortal w/Heavy Weapon (1 in 5): Graviton Shredder
. Immortal w/Heavy Weapon (1 in 5): Graviton Shredder

Medusan Immortal Squad [390Pts]

. Immortal Sergeant: Artificer Armour, Graviton Pistol, Power Fist
. 11x Immortal w/Bolter: 11x Bolter
. Immortal w/Heavy Weapon (1 in 5): Graviton Shredder
. Immortal w/Heavy Weapon (1 in 5): Graviton Shredder
. Immortal w/Heavy Weapon (1 in 5): Graviton Shredder

  • Heavy Support: +

Predator Squadron [150Pts]

. Predator: 2x Lascannons, Magna-Melta Cannon

  • Lords of War Have Moved to "Lords of War Detachment" +

Lords of War Have Moved to "Lords of War Detachment"

++ Total: [2,000Pts] ++

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tender basin
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It’s like when a non-Xth player writes an Xth list from memory

tepid storm
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I don't understand 2k lol

terse lodge
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Mechanically this is fine, if very slow

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Narratively it's very cookie cutter and doesn't have anything that makes it stand out

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Your narrative in the main chat was about securing weapons caches, why not try fit a techmarine or forgelord in there. If these guys weren't at Isstvan then the morlocks aren't a great narrative choice

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You also mentioned revenge against EC, maybe try a siege breaker to bring phosphex to commit war crimes on them with

tepid storm
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I see ok that makes more sense now

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Thank you

tepid storm
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So i still feel Cobi works but only if i add some additional more flavourful things

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++ 1. Crusade Force Organisation Chart (LA - X: Iron Hands) [2,000Pts] ++

  • Expanded Army Lists +

Expanded Army List Profiles:: Exemplary Units On, Legacy Units On

  • Allegiance: +

Allegiance: Loyalist

X: Iron Hands

  • Rite of War: +

Rite of War: Company Of Bitter Iron (IH)

  • HQ: +

Centurion [145Pts]

. Moritat: Artificer Armour, Bitter Duty (Company of Bitter Iron), Graviton Pistol, Warhawk Jump Pack

. . Chainsword: Chainsword
. . Graviton Pistol
. Moritat

Centurion, Cataphractii [145Pts]: Stoic Defender, Warlord

. Delegatus: Bitter Duty (Company of Bitter Iron), Cataphractii Terminator Armour, Combi-Bolter, Cyber-Familiar, Thunder Hammer
. Delegatus

Morlock Terminator Squad [500Pts]

. 1) Augmentor: Cyber-Familiar, Power Fist, Volkite Culverin
. 2) Morlock: Legion Standard, Power Fist
. 2) Morlock: Power Fist, Volkite Charger
. 2) Morlock: Power Fist, Volkite Charger
. Land Raider Proteus Carrier: Searchlights, Twin-linked Heavy Bolter

  • Elites: +

Contemptor Dreadnought Talon [185Pts]

. Contemptor Dreadnought: Combi-Bolter, Gravis Plasma Cannon, Gravis Power Fist with in-built ranged weapon

Destroyer Assault Squad [155Pts]: Meltabombs

. Destroyer Sergeant: Power Armour, Two Bolt Pistols

. . Chainsword: Chainsword
. 4x Destroyer w/2x Bolt Pistols, Chainsword: 4x Chainsword, 4x Two Bolt Pistols

  • Troops: +
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Medusan Immortal Squad [280Pts]

. Immortal Sergeant: Artificer Armour, Graviton Pistol, Power Fist
. 7x Immortal w/Bolter: 7x Bolter
. Immortal w/Heavy Weapon (1 in 5): Graviton Shredder
. Immortal w/Heavy Weapon (1 in 5): Graviton Shredder

Reconnaissance Squad [145Pts]

. Legion Recon Sergeant: Bolt Pistol, Nemesis Bolter
. Recon Legionary: Augury Scanner, Bolt Pistol, Nemesis Bolter
. Recon Legionary: Bolt Pistol, Nemesis Bolter
. Recon Legionary: Bolt Pistol, Nemesis Bolter
. Recon Legionary: Bolt Pistol, Nemesis Bolter

Tactical Squad [170Pts]

. Legion Tactical Sergeant: Artificer Armour, Bolter, Plasma Pistol
. 14x Legionary: 14x Bolt Pistol, 14x Bolter

Tactical Squad (Inductii) [120Pts]: Inductii

. Legion Tactical Sergeant: Bolter, Phosphex Bomb, Plasma Pistol, Power Armour
. 9x Legionary: 9x Bolt Pistol, 9x Bolter

  • Heavy Support: +

Predator Squadron [155Pts]

. Predator: 2x Lascannons, Magna-Melta Cannon, Searchlights

  • Lords of War Have Moved to "Lords of War Detachment" +

Lords of War Have Moved to "Lords of War Detachment"

++ Total: [2,000Pts] ++

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@terse lodge this sorta works. Destroyers who look to deal with this by having no mercy, dishonoured survivors of Istavaan. 4 Morlocks who escaped and therefore are assigned to a delegatus who leads the force as their iron father was lost. Inductii who are here as reinforcements in which were collected on the way, equipped with Phosphex to deliver maximum revenge

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Predator as just basic tank support

tepid storm
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Probably i guess a sword, or do i go maul, or axe idk

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Therefore because of this they recruited black shields to join them on the way to the system (my zone mortalis force)

terse lodge
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This is great dude, looks really good and enjoying the narrative you're starting to spin. Good work 👏

tepid storm
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@terse lodge would ya have any ideas for powering this up slightly and keeping the fluff. There's nightlord spam and im worrying