Serpentine

[final spear]

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io?play=cc308f63-a1f2-4a40-bac0-b125e6f2b21c Imo, this is one of my better ones, if not my best one <@&1178134658857308212>

@winter ingot @outer flint @golden crow

@dawn lake

[fathom ember]

invisible lasers lol

[minor mural]

lol

[final spear]

lol

[fathom ember]

maybe dupe the lasers a bit so people spamming jump dont get sniped or something?

[final spear]

wdym?

[fathom ember]

idk maybe the small period of time where the lasers glow is enough but i feel like goobers might not have enough time to react or get out of the way

[final spear]

That's fair, I'll see if I can make them look good at smaller angles

[dawn lake]

finally someone pings me for review

[dawn lake]

i did it with dead keys lo

l

You can make this one checkpoint

I would remove this whole block

its mean when you dont know the map

tf?

Dumb ah decoration

EXEND THE PLATFORMS!!

exend it!!!!!!!!!!

exend the gravityfield

Doesnt look beautiful ngl

so much for the design

i think

😔

most obstacles are pretty…basic

see if the lc likes them

but as they denied Grassy Goobin' 2( 😭 😭 😭 ) for a lack of creativity

i dont think this is going to be certified

[fathom ember]

quite a lot of exending is needed

[dawn lake]

unlessthere are big changes

and with that effort you can make another level that is nicer i think

[dawn lake]

fr

its bothering me when ppl dont extend

[fathom ember]

gonna extend all my floors before i ping you real quickly muhhahaha

[dawn lake]

@final spear

[safe dove]

it might be a little hard for some beginners

[swift prairie]

@dawn lake 46 wr

[dawn lake]

grrr

[final spear]

Really? I thought it would be fine for beginners

[dawn lake]

grrrr

[fathom ember]

if anything this jump is probably the "hardest"
or at least, hard to understand

[dawn lake]

https://tenor.com/view/hahaha-voldemort-laughing-harry-potter-gif-15792377

[safe dove]

ye i feel lik eit would a litttle bit

[final spear]

I think the flow kind of makes up for that. That's probably the one thing I was trying to actually make good.

[final spear]

Agree with this, idrk why I put it here

there*

[swift prairie]

speedrunning this level is really fun

although maybe add a few dash recharges?

valla i admit defeat

around .6 seconds after you if my last run has been successful

[dawn lake]

fire

[fathom ember]

oh no he admitted defeat

[swift prairie]

valla is incremnetally better than me

in speedrunning this level

although we all agree i am the superior goober right?

jkjk

[fathom ember]

I gotchu

[dreamy quiver]

idk i think its pretty good

[golden crow]

@final spear will get a review done by today

[minor mural]

I will put this simply: The last part is ... Absolutely Terrible.

[final spear]

ok

[final spear]

just that?

[final spear]

Yeah but grassy goobin'2 is for 8p this is for 16p so there's going to be a bit more beginners

[winter ingot]

Review Time!!!

Ss1: Add a sign here.

The level is cool and fun to play but way too empty. Add more decoration. Good job!!!

MaLibellule

@final spear done

[minor mural]

nope... The level is WAY to empty

[golden crow]

Ss1: is to hard for baby newbie goobers. Ss2: Walking sim ah. Ss3: Walking sim 2!. Ss4: this section is rlly anoying and petty you could even say. Ss5: Put an arrow here. over all good level but defenenlty needs work

[final spear]

@winter ingot @golden crow better?

Also <@&1178134658857308212> pls review

[golden crow]

ig

defently progress

[minor mural]

bro skipped me 😭

no review i guess...

[final spear]

Shit my bad

[final spear]

still want to do one?

[minor mural]

ping me first

no ping, no review

[final spear]

aw

[minor mural]

if you ping me rn i can give a quick review rn

[final spear]

@minor mural

[minor mural]

yes?

alr

gimme a sec

Screenshot 1: Why make players climb the walls? Just merge the spawnpoints together and add a dissapearing block at the top with no reappearing
Screenshot 2: You don't need this many arrows imoz
Screenshot 3: Why is this arrow so squished
Screenshot 4: The arrows here are unnecessary
Screenshot 5: I don't see the need to put two separate jump fields here
Screenshot 6: An indicator to indicate the position of the platforms would be appreciated (my opinion)
Screenshot 7: I don't like this obstacle, all you have to do is walk foward. Please change this
Screenshot 8: Indicator of block?
Screenshot 9: The block is barely visible through the wall here sometimes
Sccreenshot 10: This place is boring because all you have is a very long fall.

frick

Screenshot 11: This is confusing how to get on the jump zone initially, even more so for neew players I think
Screenshot 12: You can drop out of the bouncy box if you finish on the very edge
Screenshot 13: I do not like this section

@final spear done

so much typing 😭

[minor mural]

for screenshot 1, you can have 8 players on each side and divide them.

[final spear]

ss2 is just for deco

ty

[minor mural]

ping me again once you fix some things

[winter ingot]

I think the level is too crumped @final spear

[final spear]

What obstacles should I remove?

[winter ingot]

If you don’t want to remove obstacles you can make this level a 8 players race

[golden crow]

truw

e

[final spear]

@minor mural @winter ingot @golden crow Done some changes

[minor mural]

REVIEW TIME!!!

thanks for pinging me this time

[final spear]

np

[minor mural]

Screenshot 1: Not symmetrical
Screenshot 2: Remove background on the block's path
Screenshot 3: I would prefer that the cycle here makes you wait less than 10 seconds, otherwise, just add a gravity field?
Screenshot 4: Can we have a larger gravity field?

@final spear done

I might have more for later

[fathom ember]

i think the grav fields at the start make it too easy, maybe you can keep the jump zones but add the grav fields on the side or something so theyh have to go ouot of their way to go up faster

grav field looks very arbitrary here, make it extend the whole way

im not sure why you would make this move so keep it still (and maybe to make up to it add one more grav field)

also would be nice if they were spaced out more

theres probably a little too many spikes here, remove the ones on the bottom probably

this entire section feels a bit out of place for this style of level

it might be hard for some noobs

not sure what you can do to fix it

i like the idea of rotating blocks here
but maybe it could be communicated better with a background circle

[final spear]

@outer flint May you review?

[outer flint]

not bad

i like it 👍

[final spear]

thx ❤️

[golden crow]

@final spear ill try to review in the next 48 hours

[golden crow]

alr review time Ss1: this is even harder then before please just scrap this part is does not fit in with the terrain Ss2: it can be hard to get down also this trial is overcrowded Ss3: this trial seems easier but i just might have gotten better idk but this trial is good Ss4: why is there a skip in gravaty fields here? Ss5: Put an arrow here Ss6: make this activate more often Ss7: could be to hard for some people Ss8: this just creates an awkward pause and i really dont like this. Over all you did not follow my instructions or review from before because this is basically the same stuff that i gave before which is kinda frustrating but idk this lvl seems to clustered and random

@final spear

please complete these before you ping me again 😘

[minor mural]

the level needs a load of rework tbh 😭

[final spear]

Thx I'll probably keep the same idea for ss7 just execute it differently

[golden crow]

mk

[final spear]

@hollow meteor other than the issues above is there anything?

[hollow meteor]

• You could remove this blind obstacle, I died to it while sightreading

• Try to add a checkpoint here or before the other one. You do lose a lot of progress and the part is pretty difficult

• Also same thing as the last image, losing a lot of progress would suck here

Eitherway your level is cool, but its definitely nothing for me 😭 Way too linear and I much prefer non enclosed levels that arent 99% tunnels.
Imo the skillceiling is also the same as any Zoro level here due to this

So I won't vote for it, sorry

[final spear]

Zoro?

Also welcome back

and ty

[hollow meteor]

[final spear]

What is a zoro level exactly though?

[hollow meteor]

They go by Zeliged now

"Im To Fast"