#Up Up adventure

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proper agate
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First screenshot: The checkpoints on both sides are easy to miss, fix them like the sketch. Also, you can get pushed off the board by someone else so you have to wait 10 seconds to get back on, so find a way to keep the player from falling off.

Second screenshot: I don't like this part, please delete the upside down floor and the push up board, because while waiting for the push up board, you might be pushed out by someone else. Moreover, you have to wait 5 seconds before you can continue; very time consuming. Also, please make the 2 sides blocked because if the player goes out, you will have to start over again, which is quite time consuming. So you can fix it like the sketch.

Third screenshot: This checkpoint is also easy to miss. It should be reworked to match the sketch. Also, you can add more detail to this part by adding some decorations like arrows, etc. You can also make the sign move with the saw blade to make it more interesting, etc.

Fourth screenshot: This part of the climb is quite difficult for beginners. Moreover, the checkpoint is also easy to miss. So please fix it like the sketch. Also, for the trap part, I think just one sign is enough.

Fifth screenshot: This part is too cramped for 8 players. Let's expand it.

  • Overall, I think this level is a good adventure going up. The decoration is also quite splendid, beautiful, luxurious,... But there are some parts you need to fix to make it more comfortable for players. If you fix it, you can ping me so I can re-review it for you.

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proper agate
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thank you for tips, @hoary saddle i will apply these to my level

proper agate
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@hoary saddle i fixed the issues, please review again