Snow's cooking

[nova monolith]

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io?play=8c9eef4a-42b4-49ab-a97f-5b3350cf8b4e

Ok I really think this is the best map I've made

I'll be waitting for what y'all think

What about this? @pure heath @vocal lantern

[pure heath]

I love the terrain!

[nova monolith]

So I finally got a 10/10?!

or smth?

[pure heath]

right here you could make it more obvious that the direction to go is right. I was a bit confused at first. prolly add an arrow.

[nova monolith]

ok let me do it right now

[pure heath]

but yeah, to me it meets all the fundamentals of a good level that would be fun to compete in againsed others. I think that many judges weigh vissual appeal and playability on a basis of single player, often forgetting that the main goal of a certified course is to have it feel like a proper filter of skill level (who qualifies to the next round). so yeah. I like this level. It meets playability standards more that 1 or 2 of the other certified levels published in the past month imo

[nova monolith]

<@&1178134658857308212>

Plz check it out

@ornate wolf and @sacred stratus please upvote this

[nova monolith]

Where my review?! @sonic furnace

[ornate wolf]

time to do something

review time

[nova monolith]

Thx

[sonic furnace]

Sorry I’ve been busy I’m at a soccer game rn

When I get back I’ll try

[nova monolith]

👍

[ornate wolf]

First screenshot: Sorry, but this is the most boring gameplay I have ever seen

Second screenshot: If you meant these to delay people who go into them, you need to make the gravity stronger.

Third screenshot: I don't like this other path, I would make it so you can only go in the left one, and maybe add some saws.

Fourth screenshot: Cycle

Fifth screenshot: I would personally make this gravity stronger.

Overall, this is rather linear, so I would recommend some shortcuts or some more skill based gameplay, as you can't really get ahead, and when you do, there are some annoying cycles.

@nova monolith

You have to click on some of the images to see the full picture

[nova monolith]

Hm

How's it in 1/10 this time?

Ill fix these issue things

[ornate wolf]

7/10

[nova monolith]

So I can get 9/10 fixing that things?

🙏

[ornate wolf]

probably

[nova monolith]

I was so sure anybody could say something about the fourth

[nova monolith]

Done

I've fixed some of these things

I also made the gravity stronger in the first screenshot

I dont think It would be cool if I put saws in the 3rd

Bc

We already have so many saws later

Now I'm only waitting for @sonic furnace review this

[sacred stratus]

Nice lvl ig

[nova monolith]

Thank you, please thumbs up for level council check it, all they've ignored this :/

[sacred stratus]

Rip

[sonic furnace]

I have a life outside of discord you know

[nova monolith]

Chill man 😂

I can wait for weeks don't worry lol

[sacred stratus]

What's "life"?

What's "outside"?

[nova monolith]

What's "toes"?

[sacred stratus]

Yum

[nova monolith]

[pure heath]

omg this level has gotten much better! I love its simplicity yet amazing terrain thats fun to play on and has great gameplay. If you were to add anything else, try an additional obstacle that slows it down, giving goobers who fall behind a chance to catch up if they are skilled enough. (this may or may not be good advice, im not LC so idk). but yeah, I would love to see this in-game.

yo LC vote this when everything's ready🙏 🥺

the only thing im not so sure about is the automated lift thing, its cool, but it might be annoying in-game

[royal ember]

level council so dead here

[sonic furnace]

There is no change of this level I think

Unless major changes

I’ll say why

This will be a half review

So most of the level you can’t surpass fellow goobers since it’s so linear. Also you have an elevator which is the worst obstacle, if you have one it won’t be certified. Also the level isn’t really fun.

@nova monolith

[royal ember]

i thought bro didn’t want anything to do with this game

[sonic furnace]

I don’t think I could leave the community in this shape, no one is active in level council barely because of no update

[royal ember]

bro does more work than the mods

[sonic furnace]

I don’t know about that but I am online a lot

[royal ember]

so your saying you don’t do that much and discord is your life

that’s wild

why is bro talking down on himself

[sonic furnace]

I do a lot

[sonic furnace]

I’m not

[sonic furnace]

Discord is not my life I just like hanging out on it and watching people argue in the background

I do football, soccer, basketball, martial arts, and instruments

Outside of school that is

[pure heath]

band or orchestra...or neither?

[sonic furnace]

Neither

[sonic furnace]

I practice instruments

I do piano, I have the drums, and an acoustic guitar and electric guitar

Both me and my brother do instruments

[pure heath]

cool

[nova monolith]

LET'S GOOBING GOOOO!!!!

[nova monolith]

ok thank you for the review

I'll be making more maps for get certified

: D

[sonic furnace]

No problem

[nova monolith]

[nova monolith]

@vapid matrix Review?

@open vine Can you review it?

[nova monolith]

@subtle harbor Can you review it too?!

[willow scaffold]

WHO GHOST PING

I dont mind pinging but I hate ghost ping

[sacred stratus]

@willow scaffold 👻👻👻👻

[willow scaffold]

Bruuu

[nova monolith]

fr

So funny you talking about ghosts at 00:07am

[sacred stratus]

https://tenor.com/view/cat-kitten-error-leg-long-gif-13911174589816445270

[royal ember]

what

[sacred stratus]

https://tenor.com/view/cursed-random-mickey-mouse-gif-3326933426856018167

[nova monolith]

[sacred stratus]

Fr

[nova monolith]

@vapid matrix @quick wasp review GRRR

[vapid matrix]

We both on break

[nova monolith]

Alright, which lc are able to review?

[limber oriole]

This level has a lot of repetition, some of which I don't like.

[nova monolith]

which parts you mean?

[royal ember]

this levels tuff

[nova monolith]

💖

thank you

I need to other level council to review it

can you review? @subtle harbor

[nova monolith]

reviewwwww GRRR

@clear vessel review grrr

[nova monolith]

level council died 😥

[subtle harbor]

be patient bro just because we don't all spawn in and review in 2 hours doesn't mean we're dead

[subtle harbor]

1. These blocky gravity fields just add unnecessary time to the race

2. EWWWWWW A BORING FLOOR CYCLE HELP I'M DYING

3. You should definitely add some more stuff here because currently it's just an auto section since the gravity fields just carry you all the way

4. This is kinda just another copy of the theory of everything idea but even worse. Also due to the checkpoint placement it's possible to grief

5. Why bro. There is no warning for the elevator cycle, the cycle is linear and spawns without notice, the saws look ugly ahhh, and there's nothing along the way that makes the cycle challenging

6. Not sure why the sign is floating you could just move it down. Also the checkpoint doesn't do anything because there's one right after the gravity field

7. The gameplay here is alright but the 1-block floors and everything make the visual much worse

8. Bruh this is just a tilted ramp and the arrows aren't even the same angle. The saws remind me of exaltation by goobernut and move linearly with no warning and are super hard to dodge

9. Make everything here have movement other than linear and slow it down. Try to also make it a little more visually appealing

10. Goofy ah checkpoint placement

Overall this is a very beginner level. The very few ideas in this map are stolen and the obstacles are atrocious. No deco at all and the floor is horrible - I zoom out in level editor and the map looks nasty. I can't express how much I tell new mapmakers to play more good certified levels before trying to make your own. It's critical to get a sense of quality levels instead of scrambling to certify your level so you can see it in public lobbies

[nova monolith]

😭

[nova monolith]

Alright thx for review

Can you review again when I fix that?

Or you think its impossible to fix?

[subtle harbor]

uhhhhhhhh

you can give it a shot

[nova monolith]

nvm

I'll try a new attempt

[royal ember]

i kinda want to make a gooberdash map now

[nova monolith]

Happy you liked it

idk why but everyone liked so much it, only lc doesn't

[pure heath]

I still think its fine, idk. I like more simplistic levels. idk

said idk twice💀

[nova monolith]

Yep you did, but I still think its good enough to get certified

I didnt copied from any other map

Maybe im wrong or smth

Idk

[open vine]

a lot of stuff from slippery's review hasn't been changed, in particular 5, 8, and 9 (especially the bottom) should be changed

btw the lobby you made probably has decent chances to be certified but idk if you ping lc

[nova monolith]

I havent time yet for change that

I'll fix it soon then you can review correcly

[nova monolith]

That #1370057671205453845 ?

I'll be removing the arrows of that lobby bc that looks like a map

Then I think that can be certified

Not sure

[nova monolith]

About 8

Do you think it's better?

[subtle harbor]

not really

[nova monolith]

So how fix

No ideas

[nova monolith]

Btw I already fixed 6 and 7

[subtle harbor]

make it an actual obstacle section

[pure heath]

crazy

[nova monolith]

I haven't ideas ngl

[nova monolith]

Doing so many changes lol

[nova monolith]

@subtle harbor All is fixed

Review again please

[nova monolith]

@open vine Done that changes

Do review :3

[subtle harbor]

no

if anything this is worse

[nova monolith]

?

[subtle harbor]

it's worse

[nova monolith]

huh

This doesn't have sense

lol

[subtle harbor]

the level is worse

[nova monolith]

which part you didn't liked?

[nova monolith]

What I should do there bruh?

I already used too much plataforms

Should I use more?

[nova monolith]

That part was perfect, you only said for remove the checkpoints bru

[subtle harbor]

I said bad checkpoint placement

[nova monolith]

what more missing over there?

[subtle harbor]

that doesn't mean remove checkpoints

if someone hits a spike they're literally cooked

[nova monolith]

fr

[subtle harbor]

and try to put more effort into the vines they're all just 1 block wide soo

and everything has linear movement which is kinda boring

[nova monolith]

more things in 45°?

[subtle harbor]

yeah it doesn't have to be anything crazy

just like this

[nova monolith]

more deco you mean

[subtle harbor]

higher effort deco

and yeah maybe some more

[nova monolith]

I'll add a checkpoint in vertical at this part

[subtle harbor]

k

[nova monolith]

What about here?

[subtle harbor]

I have to review other levels so ping me if you got anyhthing important

[subtle harbor]

just remove it bro

[nova monolith]

the jump zones?

The spikes?

[subtle harbor]

the section

[nova monolith]

huh

[subtle harbor]

have you never played theory of everything by hello is hi

[nova monolith]

I did

but I think it's looks like that other map bc the theme

[subtle harbor]

BRO THE THEME HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH IT

[nova monolith]

AHHH

[subtle harbor]

sorry

I'm upset

[nova monolith]

No problem lol

[subtle harbor]

I'm very busy and lots of levels to review 😦

[nova monolith]

I'm getting without ideas

[subtle harbor]

yeah creating ideas is arguably the hardest part of making a level

[nova monolith]

We only need more level council that do reviews

[subtle harbor]

fr

[nova monolith]

and maybe remove the inactives

[subtle harbor]

yeah

[nova monolith]

Like, they can add players that is most active in #goober-dash

only ideas

but I only need to fix that 3 screenshots actually right?

right?

@subtle harbor

[subtle harbor]

ummm

those are just the worst ones

[nova monolith]

sorry for issue ping again btw

[subtle harbor]

nah it's alright

[nova monolith]

I'll fix it soon and you do another review alr?

not now

I need to sleep

cya

[subtle harbor]

ok

bye

[pure heath]

slippery, remember the headstone park map I made? (your favorite map).

[nova monolith]

fr

[nova monolith]

I did a lot of changes

check it now please

you too @subtle harbor

[subtle harbor]

please make these jump zones move in some other way than linear

when I told you to add deco I didn't mean to add jump zones on every double vine

this is just an up spam section with floors

position these saws better and make them not linear

this shorcut is absolutely broken and gives the player like a 20 second advantage

this literally makes me want to die because these randomly angled lasers act as 4-second cycles

what is the point of this there's no obstacles it's just a running section

[nova monolith]

huh

[subtle harbor]

same thing here

[nova monolith]

What about here?

[subtle harbor]

why is this a weird lump

[nova monolith]

lol

[subtle harbor]

another spam jump and move forward section

still linear movement

[nova monolith]

AGHH

alr alr

I will make other map

[subtle harbor]

weird shape

thank you lol

[nova monolith]

😐

[subtle harbor]

stange finish

yeah I'm sorry but that's what I was trying to get at this whole time

[nova monolith]

You cound said it before

I don't care

[subtle harbor]

well it would need like a total makeover

and the amount of changes needed could be used to make a new level

[nova monolith]

fr

maybe

[subtle harbor]

ummmm

what level are you in gd

mods

[nova monolith]

?

[nova monolith]

oh shi-

[subtle harbor]

no I'm kidding

anyways I think that you should play some more goood certifieed maps

so like kleinerspino or sunboy

those are my fav mapmakers

don't look at goonerbut or some of those guest maps those are horrrrrible

[nova monolith]

alright

I'll try to do a new lobby

[subtle harbor]

😬

ok

[pure heath]

@ mod fr

[nova monolith]

He already reported me for mods grrr

They deleted my mensage 😂

[pure heath]

lol

[quick wasp]

Bro

@pure heath

You can’t do that

[pure heath]

it was an accident, I forgot you could actually ping mods

It wont happen again 🇧🇷

[quick wasp]

Hmmmm

[pure heath]

I got a warning from a friendly turtle

[quick wasp]

Yes I wonder why

[pure heath]

you dont think.....

how many warnings do I get?

[nova monolith]

why pinged me

frfr

[royal ember]

@quick wasp

[pure heath]

bru warn goonernut

[nova monolith]

He only want to make this map reviewed

level council ignore most of pings

[royal ember]

more than most tbh

[nova monolith]

fr

[royal ember]

it doesn’t really matter though cause the person who can actually certify the levels ignores it even more

[nova monolith]

hm

Can you review this one? @strange timber

erm

something wrong happen

[royal ember]

you can’t ping lc twice but there is no rule against pinging each lc member individually

@quick wasp

@subtle harbor

@open vine

@hoary blaze

@wooden wigeon

[nova monolith]

slippery doesn't liked this

why all mods are here??

[royal ember]

@vapid matrix

@unkempt pine

@jaunty turtle

@unique hawk

@clear vessel

[nova monolith]

thank you

ig

[royal ember]

your welcome

ig

@nova monolith

[nova monolith]

lol

[royal ember]

pinging you for bad luck

actually

[nova monolith]

noooo

[royal ember]

@nova monolith

pinging you for good luck

[nova monolith]

Btw check up my another map that I did sometime ago

master saws

[nova monolith]

🫡

[vapid matrix]

How dare you

[nova monolith]

lol

[unkempt pine]

@royal ember

[nova monolith]

Review! Review! Review!

[unkempt pine]

No! No! No!

[nova monolith]

Gooberr

Grrr

[royal ember]

fr

[dark gate]

1 or 3 periods lol

not 2

For all of them

[nova monolith]

lol

What you think about this map?

[vague sable]

This is a really good level with good landscaping and terrain, but there is a large issue with it:

First screenshot: Going on the bottom is a sizeable time loss, and it isn't clear which would be faster to someone playing the map for the first time. It could work if the top path was more difficult to do, but as of now both paths are trivially easy to follow, and one is much more rewarding.

Second screenshot (edited): In this section there are again two paths, but one is a lot faster and easier than the other. If you do what I implemented in the screenshot and add spikes on the wall, it could make it challenging enough for a lot of goobers to choose the normal path.

Third screenshot: (coming in from the right) This is the main split in paths in the level, and it is extremely lopsided in length. On the bottom, you are forced to go through a bunch of lasers and 4 second cycles, while if you go on the top you are almost instantly out of the section. The only things I can suggest is making the bottom path shorter and not go as far to the left, or making the skip much more difficult, like as seen in the fourth screenshot.

@nova monolith

[nova monolith]

Alt

Alr*

[vague sable]

Tell me about any changes that you implement

[dark gate]

Although the balancing for the normal path is wacky, there are multiple interesting paths

Maybe something for this

Also, a goober can't make this jump without a dash jump, so its really unfair to those that don't know how to do it

[nova monolith]

Thats the idea 😂 😂

[vague sable]

If it was much harder it would work

[nova monolith]

lol

[dark gate]

yeah

Probably should be harder than just that

At least make the dasy jump person work for the huge shortcut

[vague sable]

Yes @nova monolith do that please and make it more difficult like in my review

[nova monolith]

@plain crypt

[plain crypt]

👍

[compact marten]

If this had some basic changes (remove op short cut ,fix lenght) it's be better than current tytan levles 😭

[nova monolith]

My levels are good bro

[compact marten]

nah i kinda dislike them

[nova monolith]

Womp womp

[compact marten]

they are too easy ||bc they are 32p||

[nova monolith]

I kinda only built 8p and 32p lol

[compact marten]

i dont have a 16p yet either

[nova monolith]

I have amazing elims ideas but I'm not that good at building them

[compact marten]

tho i have two ones for cert

[compact marten]

same

[nova monolith]

Oh damn, I'm building one

[compact marten]

i mean i have #1458142630905905236 and #mountain cave but the arent certified

[nova monolith]

Ah that's nice

16p aren't hard to build lol, I don't have the best ideas for them, I always develop insane concepts while idk, getting ready for sleep