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[charred gust]

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io?play=4f6f7712-8515-4f4b-b8db-fe16688a17ff
:)

[hollow token]

i recommend adding warning signs

and a cooler ending

[fluid granite]

I’ll check out later

[fluid granite]

@charred gust Was laggy for me

@charred gust done

First screenshot: Make arrow bigger.

Second screenshot: Add more arrows and this part is a little over decorated. At first I thought it was a section in the level.

Third screenshot: Add arrows.

Fourth screenshot: I would lower saw by one.

Fifth screenshot: Add arrows and the ramp I am on is very thin.

Sixth screenshot: Add checkpoint.

Seventh screenshot: This area feels empty

[charred gust]

@fluid granite I made the changes you requested and then some

[fluid granite]

First screenshot: I would make it look like it’s connected.

Second screenshot: This part is cramped and boring, also kind of empty.

Third screenshot: I would higher arrow and this part is empty and boring too.

@charred gust done

[charred gust]

@fluid granite I made the level longer again, see what you think

[fluid granite]

First screenshot: Why does the arrow point right? Make it point up.

Second screenshot: Higher speed of gravity field and I think you should make it so you can’t go through the checkpoint.

Third screenshot: I don’t like the ramp here because it looks weird.

Fourth screenshot: Add a floor here because rn it feels empty.

Fifth screenshot: I don’t like the ramp gravity field thing here.

Sixth screenshot: I would remove lasers.

@charred gust done

[opal hound]

softlock

[charred gust]

@fluid granite done

@strange crag new level whaddya think?

[strange crag]

this is annoying

people will probably be pushed into these spikes too often

checkpoint here

this shortcut would probably be too op

you instantly get pushed into the saw here

this is ugly, but it looks good if you change the blocks to 27 rotation on the left and 63 on the right

remove the middle route (and softlocks even though i know they arent fully softlocks)

softlock

[fluid granite]

@charred gust dons

No more reviews from me

First screenshot: I would make the gravity field stronger and make it so you can’t go through the checkpoint.

Second screenshot: I would add spikes or smth so if you get dashed you don’t fall down all the way.

Third screenshot: Block stands out with ramp against it.

Fourth screenshot: I would make this more like fifth screenshot.

Fifth screenshot: Example for fourth.

Sixth screenshot: Softlock kind of. You can’t move left.

[strange crag]

what does the sixth screenshot mean lmao

just go right gng

[fluid granite]

Guests are dumb as hell

[opal hound]

it feels weird

[charred gust]

@fluid granite @strange crag Sorry, i forgot to ping.

But the changes are done

[strange crag]

just remove it

this changes nothing

[charred gust]

@strange crag done

[charred gust]

damn, this level has gone silent

[proud quarry]

better liike that tbh, noone can dash you off into the saw

[proud quarry]

maybe

[opal hound]

that would be more fun cause then you could make the little kids cry

[delicate reef]

Why not just kill the player in the first place, instead of having those gravity fields

Also softlock

Also, I couldn't manage to die from this saw. Is it decoration? I guess it doesn't really matter.

[charred gust]

@delicate reef

done

anyone vote for this?

[charred gust]

anybody?

[charred gust]

damn

[gusty reef]

This is a really fun level to me personally, at least

[charred gust]

anybody?

[charred gust]

this level died fr

[charred gust]

:(

[opal hound]

bro got ignored

[fluid granite]

I can review if you want

[charred gust]

👍

[charred gust]

bet

[fluid granite]

First screenshot: I would add a floor here or some of them.

Second screenshot: I would make this bigger and easier to use.

Third screenshot: This saw is too big imo.

Fourth screenshot: The entrance is kind of small.

Fifth screenshot: I would extend the gravity field into the ramp more.

@charred gust done

[charred gust]

alr i fix stuff when i get home

[charred gust]

@fluid granite changes are done, would you vote for this level?

[fluid granite]

First screenshot: I would add a floor or jump zone here so players can climb back up. Also maybe include an arrow.

Second screenshot: The floor and gravity field feel like they don’t fit in. Also for the gravity fields at top that point to either side, I would extend them into the ramp.

Third screenshot: I still think the saws are bad. I would replace them with floors like the one in that one level by yellowstorm.

Fourth screenshot: I would remove floor here and add some jump zones around the gravity or replace the gravity field with a big jump zone.

Fifth screenshot: I would extend the bouncy to the same length as the gravity field and maybe put a checkpoint there too, I forget if there is already one above.

Sixth screenshot: I would remove spikes and keep saw but make it fit in more.

Seventh screenshot: I would extend the gravity field into the ramp and make the ramp more like a ramp like you did with the ramp at the top part.

Eight screenshot: I would add a floor so if players fall they don’t go through the gravity field. Maybe make it a checkpoint.

Ninth screenshot: I would add ramps at the gravity field part on top like you did before.

Tenth screenshot: I would add another floor about where I am.

@charred gust done

[charred gust]

I did most of your changes (I didn't do the fifth one because it made it look worse, and for 8 i just made the gravity field stronger)

Would you consider voting for this level?

[dark oar]

nice lev dan the boy

[fluid granite]

First screenshot: Add the jump zone in the wall.

Second screenshot: The ramps are uneven. I think it’s one block longer on the left side.

Third screenshot: I would add one more jump zone.

Fourth screenshot: Make this like the first video. (It’s at the end)

Fifth screenshot: I would make the bounce pad the same length as the gravity fields look weird.

Sixth screenshot: I would make this ramp like the one in screenshot nine.

Seventh screenshot: I would add a ramp in the saw or replace it. I would make it how it was before you changed it. I would also make the ramp something like the ramp in the ninth screenshot.

Eighth screenshot: Example for other screenshots.

First video: Example for other screenshots.

@charred gust done

[charred gust]

@fluid granite done, though I am quite puzzled about what you are trying to get me to do in the first screenshot, And for the 4th screenshot, I don't want people to get through the ramps.

[fluid granite]

The fourth looks better and it still blocks them

[fluid granite]

The first I wanted a jump zone sticking out of the block by one

[charred gust]

@fluid granite Fixed the first one, and the fourth still lets you jump through it

[fluid granite]

Remove spikes in that one on the floor

[fluid granite]

Only some rotation works

And if not just rotate them once each and see how that works

[charred gust]

If you rotate the floors at all the hitbox goes away

[fluid granite]

Try a 45 angle

@charred gust

That works

[charred gust]

@fluid granite done

@fluid granite would you vote for this level?

[fluid granite]

First screenshot: I don’t like how the ramp looks.

Second screenshot: I would move it in by one block.

Third screenshot: I would add a dash recharger so the laser activates when someone takes it.

Fourth screenshot: This area is empty.

@charred gust done

[charred gust]

@fluid granite done

[charred gust]

<@&1178134658857308212> requesting level to be put in update thread

[strange crag]

how many players in this

and has anyone voted

[charred gust]

8 players, no votes

@strange crag you wanna vote?

[strange crag]

i’ll see

[digital lintel]

😱

Add sign here

[charred gust]

👍

[charred gust]

?

[charred gust]

Have you played this level yet?

@fervent ledge

[digital lintel]

I can review now 🥰

wait me 5 min

[charred gust]

ok

[digital lintel]

First screenshot: I feel this shortcut is a bit fast for normal road users, so let's add a disappearing block here. (You can add it).

Second screenshot: Why would you do that?.

Third screenshot: This sign is crooked please fix it as sketched
(⇔. x: 0.5; y:0.5)

• Overall, this level is actually pretty nice and fun so it's not too bad and not too bad. If you've fixed it, you can ping me again for a re-review. And you can also do what I say...
  (I think it's a bit bad :<)

@charred gust done 🥰

Additionally, you can add some sort of signal to the sign (For example, make it spin, etc.)

[charred gust]

@digital lintel If I add the disappearing block, It ruins the whole shortcut, otherwise I added ur changes

[digital lintel]

up to u

I am not forcing you to add

[charred gust]

I don't think I will

[weak horizon]

.

[fluid granite]

This level could be better but I don’t think I can complain about anything

1/3

[charred gust]

yay

@strange crag 1/3

[weak horizon]

2/3

[charred gust]

yay

[digital lintel]

3/3

🙂

[charred gust]

@strange crag Nebula voted, 2/3

you could make it 3/3 ...

[strange crag]

3/3

[charred gust]

yay

thanks]

[charred gust]

@strange crag can you update in the level thread?

[strange crag]

oh yeah i was the one who uploaded this

i already put it in lc btw

[charred gust]

cewl

thanks

@strange crag Noobula?

[strange crag]

noobula

[charred gust]

Imma start using that now

[strange crag]

all according to plan…

[dark oar]

@opal hound