#Burger's Adventure
rugged scroll
spice panther
@rugged scroll
deep crown
This level has only holdright/left parts with the exception of one turn and the gameplay in those parts is pretty much not what we're looking for. Whoever gets first at the start will win the round, which isn't too great as you want to make players be able to catch up through difficult parts/good platforming/whatever else.
bleak oak
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rare jacinth
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desert prism
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zinc saffron
Pls review it <@&1178134658857308212> <@1266786429225271346>
Later when I’m free
zinc saffron
First screenshot: I don’t like how cramped the starting area is and I would delete this blocks o you don’t have to wait.
Second screenshot: I would add a dash recharger in the tree.
Third screenshot: This obstacle is repetitive, it just goes on and on. Your copy and pasted it.
Fourth screenshot: This part also repeats over and over again. It is boring and there is nothing to it.
Fifth screenshot: This cycle sucks, don’t make people wait a little for people to get in.
Sixth screenshot: This part is cramped and I don’t like the ramp obstacle.
Seventh screenshot: I would lower the floor by 1 block and this area is too cramped.
Eighth screenshot: Move the checkpoint to the floor I am standing on and remove the floor that is sideways.
Ninth screenshot: Lower the floor by 1 block. It’s also too cramped.
Tenth screenshot: I don’t like this obstacle also it is too long.
Eleventh screenshot: This area is also too long, it’s boring and I would add dash rechargers here
Twelfth screenshot: These bouncy blocks aren’t fun and the area isn’t fun
Overall this level is way too long and the obstacles are repetitive.
The obstacles are also not fun.
@spice panther done
glass drift