Vertical World

[undone snow]

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io?play=bcd3a6fb-717f-4d55-98d7-5b87a7a8b4b1

<@&1178134658857308212> Can you review this?

[wary stirrup]

i really like this level

[sacred marsh]

this level seems way too confusing and unsightreadable

[foggy ravine]

i somewhat agree with yoyble, i just feel like there is a lot of paths that look way too desirable to take on a first run, even though they only save a couple seconds or just leave you to dead ends. (examples are below)

also i would max out the strength of these grav fields, there's a chance you get stuck here and it's not very fun for a new player

lastly, the ending feels like way too long of a stretch for the ending, i would've cut it off shorter HOWEVER i understand it looks better from a design perspective so i will not ask you to change it

[undone snow]

@sacred marsh @foggy ravine How about now?

[granite quartz]

cough cough

This is a certified room

[undone snow]

???

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[granite quartz]

mispelled

lol

secret

[undone snow]

yeah

[granite quartz]

secert room lol

[undone snow]

alright

whatever

[granite quartz]

The other secert room also has this issue

[undone snow]

lol

[undone snow]

It's fixed

[foggy ravine]

you should extend this platform to the left by like 5 units so that the start is easier to get up for new players

i think this area should be made harder to get into, maybe like by making the entrance smaller or something

there should also be a sign here lol

or something cool

but i like this a lot more

1/3

[dreamy berry]

I like

Its a bit boring in some parts though

but ig it wont be that boring with more people

2/3

[sudden musk]

Ok

[marble goblet]

check my ghost on this level, idk if it's intentional or not though

[sacred marsh]

.

[undone snow]

I made some changes. Is it still the same now?

[marble goblet]

this looks cool

i mean the place i'm on

add a shorcut here (ur choice)

last but not least idk if this is intended

if this is then ur sigma

[granite quartz]

I think the last one is probably a good thing

lol

[marble goblet]

yeah it is a good thing, but idk if he meant to do it that way xD

[undone snow]

It’s intentional, not really a shortcut, but in a multiplayer race, it would be pretty cool.

[undone snow]

@sacred marsh What do you think?

[sacred marsh]

not a big fan of this one

i dont like the style of structuring this level uses

(similar to ancient dungeon)

[undone snow]

@halcyon heart @velvet hemlock @hallow sage What do you think?

[grave wasp]

2/3

@foggy ravine post to whitelist cuz u were first vote

[foggy ravine]

hi

ok

[marble goblet]

#1340218186674471002 message

so 3 votes

[foggy ravine]

oh lmao didnt see

[marble goblet]

neither did nebula lol