<@&1178134658857308212> Can you review this?
#Square World
gleaming trout
modern pilot
i personally don't like this level as you only travel in one direction
however that doesn't mean it's objectively bad that is just my thoughts
im pretty sure other lc members will be a fan of this map i just personally am not in love with it however there are no objective flaws
sly nova
Cool level
gleaming trout
@modern pilot I changed it so that it doesn't just go in one direction. How does it look?
modern pilot
mmm
actually i like this a lot more but i don't really like the first like 10 seconds
to me there's little flow and continuity between the obstacles in the start
however this is way better
also you should make an end area lol
gleaming trout
also you should make an end area lol
WDYM
gleaming trout
actually i like this a lot more but i don't really like the first like 10 second...
Is it better now?
river bough
(:
river bough
2 ez
gleaming trout
So it’s basically a speed race, huh? LOL
modern pilot
ok so with this part like, since it's at the start a lot of people are gonna get dashed/dash immediately so this will barely get usage
if i were you i might just remove the entire top path here
whole root
i dont like this map, feels a bit sloppy
gleaming trout
bruh...
gleaming trout
ok so with this part like, since it's at the start a lot of people are gonna get...
How about now?
modern pilot
this part feels kinda unfair
this part looks and feels cluttered
if you fix these like
idk
something about this level just seems off to me idk what it is
maybe the theme??
its something i wouldnt be able to guess until shown it
idk
mayb this isnt ready for cert im sorry 😭
ill wait for other opinions tho
modern pilot
last one but the ice looks really out of place
modern pilot
aaaaa i still dont know if im gonna vote this but here we go ig
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(!) this just feels like it wants you to go up, i personally am not a fan of this (continued in 2.)
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(!!) the top path doesn't even save time..? i doubly do not see a point in it being there, let alone why you pressure the player into going that way
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(?) lower this opening by like 5 blocks for better flow maybe? but thats just my thoughts
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(?) im personally not a big fan of this saw encased in a disappearing block bc of this hypothetical when someone in front of you hit it already and you just die to the saw. it's completely up to you if you want to remove it but i thought i'd put that out there
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(!) this doesnt look the best im sorry LOL, not really much else to say here
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(!) why is this ice..? i feel like it defeats the purpose of letting players get through the wind if you can't walljump, ofc u can super jump up there but its way harder to do + new players wont think to do that
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(?) lowk im not a fan of this part, it just feels forced. i'd end the level where the previous checkpoint is but again this is my thoughts and its completely up to you what u want to do with it
let me reiterate that once you apply these i might not vote but we'll see
gleaming trout
let me reiterate that once you apply these i might not vote but we'll see
Yeah
How about now
rough marlin
put a arrow here
I went up my first time
and saw the you found me sign
nothing else
gleaming trout
@lofty salmon @fading axle @candid quarry @digital silo @jaunty sky Can you review this?
lofty salmon
sure
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- in theory this is a cool skip, but you can just walk in a straight line and survive + its very cramped 🔽
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and like generally too, i really wish you wouldnt add that many extra paths, i dont know why extra paths are the like, level making meta nowadays lol
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in theory i guess this would work but im really not a fan of the amount of "burger" obstacles here or whatever (sections that have braindead gameplay)
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kinda rng hill, not really much strategy besides maybe a super jump or smt 🔼
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this looks cool and stuff but it doesnt really serve much as an obstacle 🔽
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same with this part, just straight up walking forwards 🔽
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this part is also a whole lotta nothing 🔽
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there is a possibility i would vote if these "burger" sections could be like, changed to something cooler or *something that actually serves as a **challenging obstacle ***
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if you want to see some examples of challenging/good obstacles ill show you some in certified levels, i can think of a few really good obstacles i've seen
gleaming trout
if you want to see some examples of challenging/good obstacles ill show you some...
Sure, I'd like to take a look.
What are some options I can refer to?
lofty salmon
Sure, I'd like to take a look.
this part of "attempt to make a cool level" was always one of my favorites lol, pretty challenging if you dont know the strat, you can easily outskill someone here
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this part in blue race is also really interesting, without a strat its just rng
lofty salmon
Sure, I'd like to take a look.
anyways what i mean is, i feel like the obstacles are too easy and not many ways to die
i feel like we need some more challenging stuff
rancid gulch
not a fan of the split paths
fading axle
Sometimes its better to just give up on a level and make a new, better one.
Not every level can/will get certified
lofty salmon
Sometimes its better to just give up on a level and make a new, better one.
damn 😭
gleaming trout
Okay, I give up on this.
rough marlin
Okay, I give up on this.
seriously? this level would be a 7 on 1-10 on a scale