#Stanford (2022-2023)

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dim wagon
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zamn

past jay
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Bruh I got no clue how I got into Tulane if it’s about yield protection - ig my why Tulane essay was decent then

crystal spade
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I knew a guy that got into an Ivy that got deferred πŸ˜‚

golden hare
dim wagon
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What were your short answers like?

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Now the deadline passed

dim wagon
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That's cool!

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Here's mine

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Nice

dim wagon
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Has anyone else not received their portal yet??

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Stanford seems to have not downloaded my application into their system 😭

blissful magnet
dim wagon
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that's how you're usually supposed to order them

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like on resumes

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most recent first

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also no, i doubt you needed to specify the year, whatever gave them a good impression of what you were doing

dim wagon
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Everyone does it differently.

dim wagon
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They should download it

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oh okay!

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sweet

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yeah

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i was getting a little anxious for a second hahaha

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Same stuff happened with caltech and JHU

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Almost died when I realized

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πŸ™

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u submitted after 11:59 EST

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that's why it's not downloaded yet

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I see, I see... hopefully they don't count that against me???

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They did say to submit by 11:59pm your local time on their website... but still idk

tardy blaze
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did u pay ur app fee befoer 11:59?

dim wagon
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My local time, yes.

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I submitted 10:24pm PST.

blissful magnet
dim wagon
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since i traveled a lot as you saw in my activities.

tardy blaze
dim wagon
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πŸ’ͺ

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well i mean either way not like imma get in

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lol only 4% admit... but i'm still goin' for it

tardy blaze
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at some point, for each school its a lottery

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if u throw ur name in a bunch

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you might get one

dim wagon
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stanford's been "known" to dock for last minute apps

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they'll see i submitted last minute.

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according to some

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reddit post yeah idk

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youll be fine in terms of being "on time" though

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haha sounds good

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yee

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my essays were meh too so

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good luck

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lmao

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i doubt i'll get in but that's okie :D

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was a good try

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same

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all that matters is you tried ur best

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(not really for writing my last essay the day of LOL)

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(but thank you)

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yeah ofc

hybrid shadow
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from my first read, i got you like gardening since it reminds you of your mother

dim wagon
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Mine explicitly answers but it's admittedly isn't as skillful as my other responses

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Yours is good

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I can still tell what's meaningful

dim wagon
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Lets our creative juices flow.

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Yupp

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My short responses and letter to roommate were my best responses I'd say

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I tried to show every aspect of my character through these essays

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Id say it was more strategic than my other app submissions

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is the hydrangea the meaningful thing

dim wagon
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like the act of planting it with respect to your Mama

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oh

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what's the meaninful thing

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but yes "gardening," with planting the hydrangea being more specific.

dim wagon
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it answers the question fine

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mine was also not explicit lol

dim wagon
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it's okay i spent only 2 hours on it

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stanford app was the one i spent the least amt of time on

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~30 mins on the short questions, 2 hours on each 250 word.

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for most others i spent 4-5

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damnn

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columbia "why us" essay, I spent upwards of 12

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πŸ’€

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πŸ’€

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same

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it's well written though

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like a common app

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that took a lot of revision to get it right

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especially since there's ofc a lot about columbia in general

dim wagon
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just doesn't answer the question well enough πŸ˜‚

dim wagon
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BUT i ultimately came to this: "I endeavor to explore the world, but I also seek to either reinvent my worldview or better understand it. Thankfully, with Columbia’s Core Curriculum, I can do both."

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still kinda mid though since literally every kid says that

dim wagon
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yale made me the most frustrated though

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like it lines up

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i took 3 hours to cut it down by 5 words to 125 words

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also doggo your response answers the question fs

dim wagon
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yes

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all those words were important asf

dim wagon
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there wasn't ONE adjective you coulda taken

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no πŸ’€

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like idk how i even made an essay like that

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wow

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hopefully it's just that impressive for them too

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oh well it came out as intended in the end
yeah i hope as well

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atp i'm trying to lock in

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as soon as i get these portals, i get to sending this research lmao

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i was looking at how many weeks till March 31... it's honestly not many

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yup

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exactly 3 months.

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we will know our fate.

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march will probably be the new craziest month of the season so far

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literally all my reaches release then

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totally

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except a few like washu, but barely

serene night
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I just got my portal rn

dim wagon
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What time did you submit?

hybrid shadow
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Im gonna convince myself that Im not getting in anywhere good, so I don't have high hopes during March. I'll prob end up in CC.

tardy blaze
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same just got mine πŸ™‚

dim wagon
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i am trying not to panic ✨

tardy blaze
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i submitted right before 7pm est

dim wagon
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i see so it'll probably be another hour before i get mine

hybrid shadow
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@tardy blaze @serene night is your checklist complete?

serene night
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I’ll check rn

dim wagon
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I'm slowly going more insane 🀑

serene night
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Just wait an hour or two

hybrid shadow
serene night
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No

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I live in Iowa

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So I doubt I'll even get one at all

hybrid shadow
serene night
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Yeah

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But it's all dependent by availability in your area which is very much lower as compared to something like the Bay Area

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There are barely any Stanford alumni around here

mellow sentinel
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Mine was from a guy in Bay Area lol

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There was one in my local area but she didn't interview me

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Did interview the kids from my school that also applied

golden hare
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My app hasn't been downloaded either

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😒

hybrid beacon
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here are my shorties
tbh i felt as if they ate when i submitted, now they feel mid asf

dim wagon
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lol that's cute

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como estas shorty

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LOL it's stupid πŸ˜‚

wind ridge
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It’s cute tho

golden hare
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That's amazing. I wrote some boring ass essay about writing for the stanford economic review

dim wagon
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aw well thanks, i went the creative route on these πŸ’€

golden hare
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idk I feel like stanford loves that just based on all the example essays I see

dim wagon
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πŸ™

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I wrote about food, plants, and more plants throughout most of my essays lol

golden hare
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My only good paragraph in those stanford essays (removed attachment)

dim wagon
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tahahahaha

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*hahaha

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i love it

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oh and more plants πŸͺ΄

golden hare
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I like the plant and food theme

dim wagon
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it's such a stupid theme 😭

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the only thing "intellectual" was chess, which i mentioned in my learning essay

golden hare
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ehh it's whatever... they'll see way too many intellectual essay kids, and all the important stuff is in your common app

dim wagon
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and then i talked about "apathy" for the societal issue and FDR's third election (ngl a dull short response) for the witnessed moment.

wind ridge
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When is Stanford’s deadline extension till

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Or have they even given an extension

dim wagon
golden hare
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I hope not lmao

dim wagon
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they've never given one.

wind ridge
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Oh

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Okay lmao

golden hare
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or I wouldn't be posting my essays

dim wagon
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me neither ✨

wind ridge
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makes sense lol I was wondering

dim wagon
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yeah i'm deleting these soon, too. but i figured i'd just share them to see where others were at.

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gauge how others responded to these unique questions

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i wanted to make sure mine were extra niche just so that it's not really easy to replicate.

golden hare
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Somehow I managed to not answer this question at all in the way it was asked (removed attachment)

dim wagon
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Interesting thought.

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took me a moment to interpret tho

golden hare
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yeah idk it could have been better. But I didn't want to say some worn out shit like the moon landing or d-day

dim wagon
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πŸ˜‚ that's so right

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mine is lowk so boring

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and then i answered the extracurricular one with a very interesting response

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kinda personal but, just about being me ✨

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wow my answers are pretty different

golden hare
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This is my EC essay. It's not too bad I think (removed attachment)

dim wagon
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damn that's good

dim wagon
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my essays are...

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LOL

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eh

dim wagon
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because mine are... just kinda weird lowk

dim wagon
blissful magnet
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i was about to go with the food route but ppl kept advising to not do food

dim wagon
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ahaha

dim wagon
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they get a lot of those... maybe.

golden hare
dim wagon
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at least i have a legit reason for saying food

blissful magnet
dim wagon
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because i actually do eat... the same thing, every day.

blissful magnet
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i thought id be being "cheeky" saying food but its more common than ppl expect

dim wagon
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so it won't be "i'm excited to try their coffee" or something stupid.

dim wagon
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AIME

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😭

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my intellectual essay is literally the worst topic to choose from

golden hare
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I'm not smart enough to really even know what AIME is. I've just seen it on reddit

dim wagon
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(same)

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lol

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AMC -> AIME

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AIME qual

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ohhh

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american math competition i see

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if high enough score on AMC

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yep

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america's intellectual math egalitarians

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pure guess

golden hare
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This one isn't good, but I again was scared of doing some overdone topic like political divison, income inequality, etc (removed attachment)

dim wagon
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Interestinggg

golden hare
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Maybe they'll relate to the highspeed rail though, because it was supposed to go from san fran to LA

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and it goes from like fucking bakersfield to modesto or some shit

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That's so good. Best one of your stanford essays you've showed IMO

dim wagon
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I THOUGHT THAT WAS THE WEAKEST ONE

golden hare
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NO. It's a shame it's only 50 words. But that's just about the perfect answer

dim wagon
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thank you for that 😭

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i still highly doubt i will get into stanford

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because of that stupid 4%

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but i'm going for the lottery ticket

golden hare
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I mean with a 4% acceptance rate, and certainly even lower for RD, I have zero expectations

dim wagon
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yeahhhh

golden hare
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But that's why I applied to 11 schools with no expectations

wind ridge
dim wagon
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if i get in somehow, i will literally experience cardiac arrest from the sudden rush of adrenaline through my heart

wind ridge
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the way this short one is written is quite good, but imo the idea is a tad bit generic

hybrid beacon
dim wagon
golden hare
dim wagon
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it is indeed generic, but thankfully i didn't write about climate change or politics.

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well in a sense i did politics, but not really

golden hare
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A well done generic essay is better than a half-assed "unique" essay

dim wagon
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yeah i feel like it's hard to pinpoint a problem that snaps an AO's attention

wind ridge
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yeah true

dim wagon
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woah that's a long sentence πŸ‘€

golden hare
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I'm really sorry to do this to you but the grammar is incorrect afaik

dim wagon
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but it's quite true.

golden hare
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good essay though

dim wagon
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πŸ’€

dim wagon
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"changing" is a noun (gerund)

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which means you don't have a parallel structure in your verb/noun form agreement

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oh wait it's not a gerund

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but something about that first part isn't correct grammatically but whatever

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i love the word "co operate" oh gosh

wind ridge
golden hare
hybrid beacon
dim wagon
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not sure if it's just me but i hear a tick-tock in the background and it's driving me crazy 😭

hybrid beacon
golden hare
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No. You tell a good story, but I don't see an AO taking 4 minutes to follow the whole thing

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I hear something like keyboard clicks

dim wagon
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yeah they have fifteen minutes max to read your app, and they don't want to spend a third of it watching a pink screen and a man talk

golden hare
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It would make a great essay tho

dim wagon
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great thoughts are shared, but it would likely reject you

hybrid beacon
dim wagon
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if you can't communicate who you are succinctly enough, then you are rejected.

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(succinctly as in 15 minutes) -> which means looking through your academics, stats, personal essay, extracurriculars, lors, etc etc

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so they will hardly have time to watch a video.

hybrid beacon
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wont they look at optional materials at the last? I mean that only makes sense

dim wagon
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I just would not add it. But you can do you.

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sigh i have not yet gotten my portal yet

hybrid beacon
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i got portal

golden hare
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still waiting on 4 portals. Why can't every school be like columbia 😭

tribal crest
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wait should we have written something like super intellectually engaging for stanford's moment in history prompt

dim wagon
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ikrrrrrr

tribal crest
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because i wrote about a fucking pink floyd concertπŸ’€

golden hare
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That's great

dim wagon
tribal crest
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it was like super impactful historically or whatever

dim wagon
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but still historical

tribal crest
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but like

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im regretting it LOL

golden hare
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Seriously. First of all, it's 50 words... no one cares that much. Just say the event and why you'd like to see

dim wagon
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mine was very dull

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sleepy dull

tribal crest
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huh

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i said this

dim wagon
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omg so good

golden hare
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That's great

dim wagon
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that's beautiful and creative

tribal crest
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ty

dim wagon
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PSYCHEDELIC ROCK

golden hare
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with more words, you could have explained how and why it was revolutionary. But it shows a little about you and it's a historical event, no doubt. 350k is massive for a crowd

tribal crest
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my meaning essay was about forming a rock band with a couple friends so like

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i guess it connects??

golden hare
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Somewhat, definitely a theme there anyway

tribal crest
dim wagon
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LOL

golden hare
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It isn't as well known as woodstock or live aid but maybe that makes it better

tribal crest
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true

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imagine if someone wrote about coachella

golden hare
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lmfao

dim wagon
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still no portal 😁

heavy tapir
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Me either

golden hare
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how does stanford charge the highest application fee and take the longest to even download my application

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Not to mention, they take the longest to even release decisions

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april 1st 😭

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Butttt, they start super late. September 26

mellow sentinel
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nah yall stressing about if they downloaded your app or not? 😭

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crazy

golden hare
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Not really, I'd just like to get all my portals set up

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I mean a little bit

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I'm gonna be on vacation and I don't want to deal with this shit while I'm gone

heavy tapir
mellow sentinel
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catstand at least wait a couple days fr

hybrid beacon
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you guys need to touch grass

dim wagon
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i do every day

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😁

subtle forge
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i submitted stanford last so the high app fee was a

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nice surprise πŸ’€πŸ’€

dim wagon
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I really really hope they download my app in the next hour

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otherwise i will go insane.

wind ridge
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y’all

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Just forget about Stanford until April

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Or at least until interviews

dim wagon
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Easier said than done.

wind ridge
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yes I know

dim wagon
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but you're right, i probably won't get in stanford anyways

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so why should i care πŸ˜‚

wind ridge
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but im trying that and it’s working as of rn

wind ridge
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low hopes

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so not too disappointed

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when decisions come

dim wagon
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especially looking at the harvard lawsuit, my hopes have tanked.

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in literally every school i applied to-- stanford, upenn, nyu, columbia, northwestern, even uw in my home state

golden hare
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I have low hopes, but I still want to get a good acceptance so I don't end up going to my state school even tho it's a damn good school

dim wagon
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haha SAME

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i want to go somewhere new and explore

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chicago, pennsylvania, new york, heck even georgia

golden hare
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Worse, I live in the same fucking city as my state school

dim wagon
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i applied to emory

dim wagon
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ngl UW is a great school but i don't really wanna go

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i've already been on campus a billion times

golden hare
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I was going to apply to emory but I missed their scholarship deadline

golden hare
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Not Wyoming btw

dim wagon
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oh -> university of washington haha

golden hare
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Yup I'm in wisco

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UNC is my #1 state school though

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But oos is so brutal there

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I'm probably more likely to get into duke lmao

dim wagon
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gotcha

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hahaha

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didn't apply to duke though i considered it

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i considered duke, dartmouth, and brown. ultimately decided against all of them idk why

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probably just the time crunch

golden hare
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Fair. I thought about Dartmouth but I can't live in the middle of nowhere in New Hampshire. And brown grads don't make any money and don't place as well in finance

dim wagon
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LOL

golden hare
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And I decided against Yale for carnegie mellon because I can't handle living in New haven

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And don't get me started on Shithica

mellow sentinel
dim wagon
dim wagon
mellow sentinel
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I'm in Washington too

dim wagon
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Oh that's so cool! I am going to visit UW tomorrow :))

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(again, sigh)

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for the monthly foster school of business yeoc immersive program

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i'm so burnt out rip

mellow sentinel
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I went there with a few friends spring break

dim wagon
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it's a neat campus

mellow sentinel
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Very lovely target

dim wagon
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yes, yes indeed.

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although if i get into stanford... i'm going lol

mellow sentinel
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Ya obvi

dim wagon
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my responses are definitely... a little different for the most part i think

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a kid at my school has already been accepted though... so idk

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there's like a dozen kids from my school applying πŸ˜‚

mellow sentinel
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There were 4 kids including myself

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From my school

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I was so stressed when they all got an interview invite a week after the deadline and I didn't catstand

dim wagon
mellow sentinel
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That applied

dim wagon
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It has also been officially four hours and Stanford has not yet downloaded my app 😭

dim wagon
mellow sentinel
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Ya they didn't

dim wagon
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LOL

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Well very neat that you did!

mellow sentinel
dim wagon
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haha

mellow sentinel
dim wagon
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I doubt I will get in.

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But we shall see. My short answers are all "written decently"

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so hopefully that means something πŸ™

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Darn !! Y'all got some pretty pumped up essays to present to AO's

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FINALLY YES LET'S GOOOOO

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my heart rate spiked to 140

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All I've got is food, how I love to part of the "bubble" , my crazy atheist friend and Discord Discord Discord...smh

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i spent 8 hours on my 8 essays

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and i love them all

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:D

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That's a great feeling bruh... savor it now and when you get admitted πŸŽ‰

heavy tapir
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Yea stanford has been my fav essays so far

dim wagon
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for comparison, i've spent ~20 hours per most other colleges with the same types of questions

heavy tapir
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They actually have good prompts unlike every other school with their β€œwhy us” goofy essays

dim wagon
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i talk about my hydrangeas, my rhododendroms, my azaleas, my succulents...

hybrid beacon
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for me, i really like caltech's and yale's
thought i liked stanny's but now they just seem too cliche

heavy tapir
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I read yours, i think yesterday, and they were super good

dim wagon
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oh yes!!

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you did! i super appreciate you btw <3

dim wagon
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i can't anymore

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even my DAD said they were good when usually he says "it's fine"

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he told me this morning "william, i read your hydreangea essay. and i just wanted to tell you that you really are a beautiful writer"

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That's the nicest thing he's said to me in my life lol

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ripp yikes

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yeah

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my dad usually is very critical

hybrid beacon
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indian moment

dim wagon
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so for him to tell me something like that means a ton.

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My dad is only good at writing financial statements πŸ’€

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literal mood

hybrid beacon
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i showed my dad my college list in august
he just looked at harvard and laughed

hybrid beacon
hybrid beacon
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i wanted to say it won't be so funny if you were rich
but the i didn't cuz i wanna liveπŸ’€

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fr

dim wagon
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well hey always good to give stuff a try

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my dinner convo tonight:

me: "Dad, would you be shocked if I got into Stanford, Harvard, UPenn, Columbia, or Northwestern?"

him: "It would be a very pleasant surprise."

πŸ˜‚

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πŸ™ i sent it in several days before the deadline and a lot of people said it was "good" so I'm hoping that they were right

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shooting for that seven percent lol

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nahhh

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No

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I don't think they ever have.

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very basic responses

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i would have deleted the first sentence in answer four since it's just filler space. answer 5 was unique.

hybrid beacon
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lemme share mine, ig i've shared the shorties already

dim wagon
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good, but could probably improve with a little more personality shining through other than the very blatant quirk lots of kids try to show

hybrid beacon
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Dear roommate
I'm hardly athletic, but I'm game for weekly jogs. I may lack the speed or endurance to keep up, but yelping with sore knees, I’ll try.
Getting into comedy as a 15-year-old wasn't exactly in-line with the age-restrictions of open mics. In the treachery of immaculate rejection from every club, it was my innate will to persevere and try that drove me to perform on streets, parks, and slums. So the next time you see me refusing to drop a mind-boggling course, you’d know why- it’s because I try.Hey, that rhymed!
When not exerting my utmost, you’d find me dismantling appliances. While the divine convenience of a microwave is considerably comforting, I, for one, am obligated to investigate the insides of it. Don’t worry though, I assemble it back…mostly.
I don't believe Stanford has any, but if we get trapped together in an eternally boring lecture, I'd have plenty of ideas. During this 5-hour statistics class in sophomore year, I jotted the numbers of all the interstate vehicles I could make out from the flimsy windowsill of our class. Based on the direction they were headed, transportation trends of State-highways from geography textbook, and newfound knowledge of statistics, I managed to concoct an algorithm to roughly determine the traffic of a neighboring city. Google Maps narrowly beat me by 20 years, but hey, I try.
I wish I could elaborate upon my hobbies like card-stacking, or gardening cacti, but for now, I've a microwave to tend to...

wind ridge
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eternally boring lecture πŸ₯Ά

hybrid beacon
hybrid beacon
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also yep, im a weird writer

fervent perch
dim wagon
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it was cute

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My essays were... all varied

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across the board

heavy tapir
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Same πŸ’€

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Like none of them related, but they all kinda fit in to paint my personality

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I mean theyre not horrible, so if u have a strong application outside of essays id say u probably have a chance

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Idk how good they actually are, but ik theyre not bad

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Well ive read them, but nobody on this server would be able to tell u how strong ur essays are other than professional counselors

dim wagon
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i have nearly 0 honors lol

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don't complain

hybrid beacon
dim wagon
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mine are few.

heavy tapir
dim wagon
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πŸ™

hybrid beacon
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I hated my gpa, but honors were better

dim wagon
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but thank you :D

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1% πŸ’ͺ

tame dome
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damn fire

heavy tapir
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Nobody here can accurately chance u either

hybrid beacon
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its ocsc camp but like yeah
tbh its funny how actual medal winners are applying and im jumping over a simple nomination

heavy tapir
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Bc a lot of it is luck

hybrid shadow
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I only had one honour 😭

dim wagon
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Low.

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For all of us.

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LOL

heavy tapir
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Id like to hope im in the why-are-you-even-applying-low bracket πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

dim wagon
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my favorite phrase in my chess essay is "I often played against myself" but that's about the only fun thing in there.

hybrid beacon
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it has occurred to me that i've shared so many snippets of my app, someone patient enough to scroll through all the threads can impersonate me with 0 problems

heavy tapir
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I got a fee waiver 😎

dim wagon
heavy tapir
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Nah my hooks will carry me πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

dim wagon
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what junior is wasting their time checking a bunch of kids who just submitted their stanford essays

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I think you will be rejected.

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Β―_(ツ)_/Β―

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Straightforward comment.

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I do not think you will make it to the Committee phase.

hybrid beacon
# heavy tapir I got a fee waiver 😎

yeah me too and its so fun
like I legit just scroll down the list whenver im bored and apply to a obscure uni with no supps, i even got into a couple and i don't even remember applying lol

heavy tapir
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I mean realistically speaking, none of us have a chance lmao

dim wagon
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Yeah I'm looking at my own and think I will be rejected, too.

heavy tapir
dim wagon
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I did not connect my stuff well enough to my interested majors

hybrid beacon
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I've decided to include that yt video
idk what they'll make of it but its legit and its me

hybrid shadow
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for my IV supp, i talked about iron man, connected that to programmable matter, then to medicine, and then a theory I had, then back to iron man

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iron man's nanotechnology

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that sounded cool

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and we have something like that in real life

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programmable matter

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very abstract though

heavy tapir
dim wagon
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i did NOT just go onto chance me to ask for people to evaluate me 😭

dim wagon
fringe notch
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reading this thread gave me bad anxiety

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getting #rejected πŸ’”πŸ˜­

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it took me a good 20 minutes to get over the fact that id SUBMITTED my stanford app

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harvard's a yolo submission but w the amount of time I'd spent writing my stanford supps i fell into the trap of becoming attached to a fucking building and a name

fair aspen
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Same dude

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Stanford got me feeling a kind of way

dim wagon
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here's my short responses and roommate essay lol, the IV essay, I talked about a hurricane simulation I made and my presentation (+ how it made me excited ofc), and the other essay I talked about the algorithm I made as something meaningful

dim wagon
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they did?

hybrid beacon
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well i read at least 5-6 on this very thread

tough anchor
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Lmao 😭

dim wagon
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how were the rest in your opinion?

hybrid beacon
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well yes, I was just saying how its incredibly prevalent

wind ridge
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😭

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i wrote about something similar

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but not the same ig

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mine was more about people 'refusing to have difficult conversations'

past jay
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What is the IV essay?

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I’m hearing so many people mention it

azure wren
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How much do ap scores matter for stanford? I applied as a biochem major but i didnt put in my ap bio score cuz i took it during the pandemic year and that shit was butt hard 😭😭 i got a 3 but my chemistry course grades n everything were rly good

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So im nervous

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😭

azure wren
heavy tapir
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But they could definitely be a boost

azure wren
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😭😭

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Im screwed asf

past jay
mellow sentinel
dim wagon
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Like everyone

heavy tapir
mellow sentinel
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catstand which ones

heavy tapir
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Roommate and intellectual curiosity πŸ˜™πŸ˜™

azure wren
mellow sentinel
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cs

azure wren
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Oof

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Thats like rly

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Hard

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😭😭

mellow sentinel
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doesnt matter what u say, cant even declare till sophomore year

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u either get in or not lol

azure wren
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Omg rly

mellow sentinel
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yeah

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it doesnt ask for your major, if you recall

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it just asks what your interests are

azure wren
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How were ur ap scores

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Omg

mellow sentinel
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they want you to explore and have an open mind

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i think i put cs, bio, econ as the 3 interests it asked for

dim wagon
mellow sentinel
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i can send them in on my portal now tho

mellow sentinel
hybrid shadow
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i started mine with "Picture this:" and described a scene. the challenge was indfference

crystal spade
sonic silo
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wooo stanford for the win

hallow pendant
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im ngl i didnt know how important intlelectual vitality essay wwas

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at all

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kinda memed it 😭

dim wagon
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Ohh yours are very very diff from mine lol

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first one made me very uncomfortable πŸ˜‚

Second one one was good, but I do think that the relationship was pretty irrelevant to the essay as a whole.

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imo

dim wagon
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I really like your essays!

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I find it funny we both talked about Coupa cafe during our roommate essays

dim wagon
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yeah you're not alone 😭 my IV essay I think highlights a great experience, but idk if I elaborated enough

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with that essay, you answered the prompt by highlighting that chess interested you and encouraged you to learn more, then you demonstrated that you wanted to learn more by watching youtube vids and more practice

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it at least goes beyond the prompt in that fashion

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Not too good though. I can imagine them just sighing and being like "um okay"

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Β―_(ツ)_/Β―

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It will be a very pleasant surprise if I get in, especially because someone else from our school just got in.

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So I think our chances for another kid will be even lower.

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i think that serves better tbh, especially if they actually matriculated to stanford

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they'll have a better taste of the students your school produces and might be more favored towards you

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Yeah every year there's 1 student that goes.

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But rarely 2.

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Last year they accepted 2.

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And the time before that was like in 2018

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yeah i don't see it as a negative

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wish my iv essay was more fluid tbh

hybrid shadow
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cause at the end of the day, they're looking at ppl who will work alongside professors

dim wagon
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I had no clue it was the most important lmao

hallow pendant
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I absolutely memed it and talked about how I broke my computer and fixed it when i was 12 LMAO

dim wagon
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But I talked about my research internship

past jay
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Honestly I really like all of the essays I wrote for Stanford ! I’ll send through my IV and room mate essays now :)

past jay
dim wagon
past jay
dim wagon
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This is so heartfelt

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Shows how you aren't selfish

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I agree.

past jay
dim wagon
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be careful posting your essays

past jay
dim wagon
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puts out a lot of ec information and stuff

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that can be used to doxx

past jay
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Oh so true

dim wagon
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so yeah just delete when done showing

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nice work though siena

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good reads

past jay
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Thank you!

dim wagon
# dim wagon

Anyone have an opinion on my IV essay, this was the worst one on my Stanford app

dim wagon
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yep

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its a thread so its safer in here

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but just in case

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Although I wouldn't imagine why someone would want to doxx with so much energy.

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people suck

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its better to know that before you experience it

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Yeah that's true

dim wagon
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Honest

dim wagon
dim wagon
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i think you spend too much time being descriptive rather than getting to the point

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these essays are 250 and not 650 for a reason

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personally, I dislike sentences that give little to no meaning

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otherwise i think it's a fine essay

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def could be edited but not horrible at all

dim wagon
# dim wagon Honest

It was really hard to follow the lines with the tangential information like "overpowered my spotify music" and other details thrown in there. Somewhat difficult to follow with so many prepositional phrases. I read more about the simulation itself than seeing emotion come off the page to show your excitement about it.

I like the idea, but I do think that it could have done a few more edits to be more refined and responsive to the prompt.

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ive seen worse

dim wagon
# dim wagon prompt?

The Stanford community is deeply curious and driven to learn in and out of the classroom. Reflect on an idea or experience that makes you genuinely excited about learning. (250 words)

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ah nice

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Of course, mine isn't much better.

dim wagon
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also a lot of your guys' essays have comma misplacement

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if youre applying to others make sure to get it edited/grammar checked

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by other people

past jay
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I think it could have had a bit more emphasis on your personal experience and feelings other than that it’s good

dim wagon
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Yeah that's something I gleaned about it, it didn't have as much emotion as my other responses

past jay
dim wagon
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lmao, i think commas are useful in that they can add flow

past jay
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I just use them when I feel like I need a breather in the sentence LOLL

dim wagon
dim wagon
dim wagon
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I know the difference between "everyday" and "every day," "fewer" and "less than," etc πŸ’€

past jay
dim wagon
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and i often correct my dad...

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let me know if you want edits or anything theyre not useful since yall have submitted but im pretty honest

past jay
dim wagon
dim wagon
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youre probably right 75% of the time

dim wagon
past jay
dim wagon
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@dim wagon I believe it is the second snapshot.

past jay
dim wagon
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i think "unique" is a strong word, some kids go so far to be unique that it get's overly fake/showy, i would like an ideal essay to maintain some sincerity

dim wagon
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I've gotten mixed thoughts. Some thought it was "brilliant," others thought it was bland.

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I guess the AO will determine the final verdict πŸ’€

past jay
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Your essay is definitely sincere and realistic as a note to roommate but I’m not sure it shows something insanely β€œrevealing” about you as other people may end up writing about

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LOVE. the hamilton reference

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If u need a roommate if we both end up at Stanford…. I’m the one

dim wagon
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Looks like it's also a snapshot in a day of life at Stanford

past jay
dim wagon
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Nice

past jay
dim wagon
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Yeah I didn't want to write some stupid thing about smelling roses or being addicted to minecraft or rubbing my nose.

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Same

hybrid shadow
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did anyone get an interview request yet?

dim wagon
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I wanted to sound genuine but show a couple ways I could interact with the roommate

wary hemlock
dim wagon
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and btw i LOVE the good place

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LOVE IT SO MUCH

wary hemlock
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do u know how stanford selects who getsvinterviews?

dim wagon
dim wagon
# dim wagon <@456226577798135808> I believe it is the second snapshot.

all i got from your roomie essay was that you like food and plants, which i could probably find these qualities in other people, especially the combination of the two, you definitely could have used the 250 words to say some other stuff about yourself and let your honest quirks shine through. i think people tell you it's brilliant because it's written well, like the flow is nice and it is pretty sweet lmao. it's a well written essay but i think you really could have made it stronger with more unique qualities, the essay is supposed to be a large fit maker/differentiator. it's not a negative thing though, i think it's fine. imho i dislike roomie essays that reveal large amounts of unnecessary and uncomfortable quirks.

dim wagon
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i read your harvard one

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i thought that was better

dim wagon
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but you obviously had more room ahah

past jay
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Agreed- I’ve read ones that are very unnecessarily open about certain things … wouldn’t reccomend

dim wagon
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I feel like they also might get caught off guard by how bland it is in a sense

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real lol

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people be like

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my shit smells like strawberries

past jay
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I used my stanford IV for harvard and added a paragraph or two

dim wagon
dim wagon
dim wagon
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the ones in your harvard essay

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like the smells/candles was a quirk

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for example

dim wagon
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Tysm

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Ohhh I see

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I wrote about candles wha-

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i forgot what i wrote tbh

past jay
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Guys icl why is everyone mentioning the coupa café and what is its importance 😭

dim wagon
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πŸ˜‚

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seriuosly though

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Idek why😭

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I didn't know it would be common

past jay
heavy tapir
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I liked my roomie essay

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I was just being my usual self, it was super sarcastic

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My most fun essay

dim wagon
# dim wagon <@456226577798135808> could you take a look at my roommate essay? It's the secon...

similar thing to doggo, the music score thing is pretty unique though, and what's with this cafe? 😭 otherwise i think it's written fine, your semi-colon usage is a bit heavy though, on future essays make sure to limit that and use periods, it makes sentences unnecessarily choppy. i don't think anyone would talk about tik tok though πŸ˜‚ or at least watching it lmao - i don't know if that's a quirk either, i feel like a lot of people watch it but may not admit due to it's tendency to lead to procrastination. also you use a lot of adjectives, i think if you remove enough you have space for some more meaningful sentences. the good thing is that this essay felt real and sincere, you seem like a chill roommate, i like people with funny laughs haha.

dim wagon
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im not qualified

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i have not gotten in

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but ill rip it apart

past jay
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Omg you didn’t get a chance to rip mine

dim wagon
past jay
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I low-key got scared abt the doxx thing and deleted them all even tho my roomie one only shows that I’ve been to prague 😭

dim wagon
past jay
dim wagon
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I LIKE THIS

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very unique original format

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only issue you use a lot of space for descriptiveness rather than more info about yourself

past jay
dim wagon
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you go into the technical aspects of being a roommate rather than your own interests, but it still reveals a lot of about you

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well done

dim wagon
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REALLY strong conclusion

past jay
dim wagon
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haha it's fine

past jay
dim wagon
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it stands out in a good way

past jay
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My last sentence low-key cringe but whatevs

dim wagon
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nah i like it

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Are Stanford interviews in person

deft epoch
wind ridge
tough anchor
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well too late i already submitted so hope the AO likes it ig coolcry

modest ingot
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hello my harvard of the west people

tough anchor
# past jay

omg this is really good! i really love how you ended it

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i love the one where you talk about worship in one of the short essay questions, you make it very powerful in such a limited amount of space

umbral flame
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have emails with portal info been sent out yet?

serene night
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Yes

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But as long as you submitted your app on time, you're def gonna get your portal soon

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dw :)

umbral flame
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i didn’t apply, but i’m looking for a pdf of what the confirmation email with the portal info (with all personal info blacked out) looks like

tough anchor
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you'll get an email titled Your Stanford Application

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i would send a pic but im lowkey lazy to block all my personal info out

serene night
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yeah, too much work

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lol

hybrid beacon
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Dear Kushagra,

This email confirms we have received your 2023 Regular Decision application to Stanford!

The next step is to use the information below to log in to your Stanford portal, which is where you can check the receipt of required materials, update your application, and view your decision letter once decisions are released.

It takes time for materials to be matched to your application. Therefore, do not worry or contact the admission office if materials show as "Awaiting" and you know they have been sent. This is perfectly okay, even if it is past the deadline.

Please just log in to your portal regularly and continue to monitor your checklist. Once we process all materials, we will contact you if you are still missing a required material.

If you have questions regarding your submitted application, please review the information on our After Submitting Your Application page.

Thank you for applying to Stanford. We look forward to reviewing your application!

Best,

Mike Devlin
Director of Admission

umbral flame
mellow sentinel
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shoutouts mike

tardy blaze
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is it possible to change our financial aid status after we've applied (aid to no aid)

hybrid beacon
mellow sentinel
#

what

hybrid beacon
mellow sentinel
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no i got into stanford

serene night
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the farm

hybrid beacon
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oh fuck im dumb

hybrid beacon
mellow sentinel
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catstand im not tryna go into the middle of the forest, ed to dartmouth is for the brave souls

hybrid beacon
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yea, its so damn green, i saw a tree in your username and immediately though of dartmouth

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congrats on stanford tho

mellow sentinel
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stanford's mascot is a tree lol

hybrid beacon
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yeah, ik, just slipped my mind

mellow sentinel
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haha ok

dim wagon
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How does Stanford consider interviews

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Are they evaluative?

hybrid shadow
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yes

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but at the end of the day, we all know Stanford doesn't exist

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so lets move on with our lives

dim wagon
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Maybe it only exists in my frame of mind

fair aspen
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XD

dim wagon
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That would also mean you guys only exist in my frame of mind

wind ridge
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Stanford doesn’t exist it’s just a random farm in Ohio

mellow sentinel
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u can get a great interviewer or an old head lol

dim wagon
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tbh , i just need an interview to patch any holes left by my essays πŸ’€ i've had pretty liberal interviewers from other schools so far so I'm hoping that doesn't change

subtle forge
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i’ve had no interviews so far so

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one would be nice πŸ€·β€β™€οΈ

mellow sentinel
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i had a pretty chill guy

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our convo lasted over an hour lol

dim wagon
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Yess love the interviewers that actually converse

azure wren
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does stannie look at midyear reports

mellow sentinel
heavy tapir
mellow sentinel
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it was some chill guy from san fran, wasnt even a local alumni

azure wren
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then where is it

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lol

mellow sentinel
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i dont think they look at it until u get accepted

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spinthink maybe wrong tho

azure wren
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OMG GOOD

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I LOVE STANFORD

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lets hope it loves me

mellow sentinel
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lool

azure wren
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this college process is like dating

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lmfaoo

azure wren
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guys should i update my app for course schedule change once i get it for the new semester?

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to show im still taking rigorous classes n whatnot

azure wren
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but i was an idiot

mellow sentinel
azure wren
#

yeah i did

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but im dual enrolled at a college

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so i get new schedule for the spring semester

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the ones i reported are my fall semester courses

mellow sentinel
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spinthink i mean if there is a change, id report

azure wren
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alrighty

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and stanford doest look at freshmen grds

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woooo

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i need to recalculate my gpa then

mellow sentinel
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didnt know that

fallen slate
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Wonderful

fair aspen
dim wagon
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Y'all don't think the essay sharing here is becoming a bit over the bar. I mean it's cool but it might make some applicants insecure and anxious πŸ’€πŸ’€ just saying

wind ridge
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πŸ’€πŸ’€

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Valid point imo

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maybe a risk of someone using your essays for another college as well

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id suggest sharing essays via DMs

dim wagon
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fr... you're right

hybrid beacon
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i just discovered stanford fleet singers and omg they align so much with my ECs
I would've talked about it in the why stanford instead of a random stem club I partly liked, too bad i submitted alreadycoolcry

fair aspen
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XDxD

fair aspen
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Just followed Stanford on Linkedin

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hope this shows my commitment to the college and gets me in

sonic silo
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for my stanford IV essay i wrote about an idea i had for protein folding

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then tied it to potential societal impacts, what i did to explore/research, then tied it to stanford's options

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hopefully they like me 😭

fair aspen
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They will man

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Dw abt it

azure wren
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Lmfaooo

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Thats when it became my dream school fr

azure wren
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😭😭

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I jst talked about the reason i got into cancer research

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N like how cool new cancer therapies r

wind ridge
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I’ve read essays of some accepted students and they didn’t connect it

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Even I didn’t connect mine to Stanford

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You’re fine

azure wren
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😭

azure wren
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I dont think i mention stanford once other than the

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Looking forward to experiencing one

sonic silo
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and it was just a small part at the end for me

azure wren
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😭ok good good

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Man i was struggling w the word count

sonic silo
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damn

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too much to say or too little

azure wren
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Too much

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😞

sonic silo
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honestly fairs haha

azure wren
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But its okay i got to say what i wanted to

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And showed as much of me as possible

sonic silo
#

the two stages of college essay grief:
(1) oh my goodness this is so long how am i gonna fill it up
(2) AAAAAAAAAARGH NOWHERE NEAR LONG ENOUGH GOTTA TRIM

azure wren
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The stanford apps were the funner ones

azure wren
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I WAS LIKE 250 + 250 + 250

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ITS JST TOO MUCH

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and then i did too much

wind ridge
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My first CA draft was like 950 words😭

azure wren
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😣

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Nah now thats too much

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😭

wind ridge
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took me a solid week to cut down

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and then do so many more drafts

azure wren
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I did my app in a day

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😭😭

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Yo please

wind ridge
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oh

sonic silo
#

my harvard ones took weeks to do

wind ridge
#

πŸ’€

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You a speed runner

azure wren
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Like in 6 hrs

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THATS RIGHT

sonic silo
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bc i'm an int'l and the uk system is completely different so i had noooo idea how to write

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but after that i really got into the flow

azure wren
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AND ITS FUNNY

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CUZ ITS MY DREAM SCHOOL

azure wren
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Ooo

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No university of oxford typa stuff

sonic silo
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i did columbia, stanford, MIT-tens, and my other choices in about two days each (one to write, one to edit/trim/polish)

past jay
sonic silo
azure wren
#

If u got into stannie and oxford

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What would u choose

sonic silo
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i showed my american friend and they were like we love you but this sucks

azure wren
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AW

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LMFAOOO

sonic silo
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they were like

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you're nice, your ECs are nice, i'm sure your interview would've gone well

past jay
sonic silo
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but they'll throw your file out reading the first sentence

sonic silo
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nah can't lie i thought that first draft slapped so it hit me 😭

hybrid beacon
past jay
#

I fully wrote like 12 common app essay drafts

sonic silo
azure wren
#

The way u guys talk abt america is so funny

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😭😭

sonic silo
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ah, america, the plucky colonies that could

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we're rooting for ya!

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and that one old guy in vermont he's a g

past jay
sonic silo
past jay
hybrid beacon
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as a non american person who's seen the insides of the comedy world,
i can confirm that some standup comics here use fox news and cnn for material;

past jay
sonic silo
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ayyy, sweet! i'm from southampton myself

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don't suppose you attend westminster? πŸ‘€

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uk gang rise up

past jay
past jay
hybrid beacon
sonic silo
#

which others are you applying for

past jay
azure wren
#

😭😭

past jay
azure wren
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American optimism is mostly the white ppl

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😭

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The american dreams and values are a lie

sonic silo
#

bernie is the real american dream

azure wren
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And the ppl who rly achieve those r the ppl who r rich and connected

sonic silo
#

and he's still more right than our green party

azure wren
#

Were all jst pawns in the games of capitalism

past jay
azure wren
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But imma still eat it up

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And go to a pwi school

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😞

sonic silo
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hopefully i get into one

past jay
sonic silo
#

realistically it's one or none icl

hybrid beacon
# azure wren I can jst imagine the accents

um yeah, i've been meaning to ask that @past jay or any other brit feel free to chime in
as such a deeply amalgamated and geographically linked cluster of people, how did yall wind up with 88878 accents?

past jay
sonic silo
past jay
sonic silo