#Stanford (2022-2023)
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Bruh I got no clue how I got into Tulane if itβs about yield protection - ig my why Tulane essay was decent then
I knew a guy that got into an Ivy that got deferred π
Probably
Yup that'll definitely happen
Here was my two summers one:
That's cool!
Here's mine
Nice
Has anyone else not received their portal yet??
Stanford seems to have not downloaded my application into their system π
we didn't need to chronologically order the year right?
i did 2022, 2021
that's how you're usually supposed to order them
like on resumes
most recent first
also no, i doubt you needed to specify the year, whatever gave them a good impression of what you were doing
No need
Everyone does it differently.
Wait until midnight today
They should download it
oh okay!
sweet
yeah
i was getting a little anxious for a second hahaha
Same stuff happened with caltech and JHU
Almost died when I realized
π
u submitted after 11:59 EST
that's why it's not downloaded yet
I see, I see... hopefully they don't count that against me???
They did say to submit by 11:59pm your local time on their website... but still idk
did u pay ur app fee befoer 11:59?
i meant like i didnt even say 2020: and 2021: i just listed the things i did
yeah i did it just to show the different trips i went on
since i traveled a lot as you saw in my activities.
u should be good π
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well i mean either way not like imma get in
lol only 4% admit... but i'm still goin' for it
at some point, for each school its a lottery
if u throw ur name in a bunch
you might get one
they don't generally but
stanford's been "known" to dock for last minute apps
they'll see i submitted last minute.
according to some
reddit post yeah idk
youll be fine in terms of being "on time" though
haha sounds good
yee
my essays were meh too so
good luck
lmao
i doubt i'll get in but that's okie :D
was a good try
same
all that matters is you tried ur best
(not really for writing my last essay the day of LOL)
(but thank you)
yeah ofc
heres mine
from my first read, i got you like gardening since it reminds you of your mother
Mine explicitly answers but it's admittedly isn't as skillful as my other responses
Yours is good
I can still tell what's meaningful
I do appreciate that we can all have a lot of flexibility.
Lets our creative juices flow.
Yupp
My short responses and letter to roommate were my best responses I'd say
I tried to show every aspect of my character through these essays
Id say it was more strategic than my other app submissions
is the hydrangea the meaningful thing
not the hydrangea itself π₯²
like the act of planting it with respect to your Mama
oh
what's the meaninful thing
but yes "gardening," with planting the hydrangea being more specific.
oh yeah i got this too
okay yeah i got that
it answers the question fine
mine was also not explicit lol
fine π₯²
it's okay i spent only 2 hours on it
stanford app was the one i spent the least amt of time on
~30 mins on the short questions, 2 hours on each 250 word.
for most others i spent 4-5
damnn
columbia "why us" essay, I spent upwards of 12
π
π
same
it's well written though
like a common app
that took a lot of revision to get it right
especially since there's ofc a lot about columbia in general
π thank goodness several people have said that
just doesn't answer the question well enough π
yeah and at the end i was like, i quit.
BUT i ultimately came to this: "I endeavor to explore the world, but I also seek to either reinvent my worldview or better understand it. Thankfully, with Columbiaβs Core Curriculum, I can do both."
still kinda mid though since literally every kid says that
i mean it does
yale made me the most frustrated though
like it lines up
i took 3 hours to cut it down by 5 words to 125 words
also doggo your response answers the question fs
o h m y
yes
all those words were important asf
not explicitely which is a weakness
there wasn't ONE adjective you coulda taken
no π
like idk how i even made an essay like that
wow
hopefully it's just that impressive for them too
oh well it came out as intended in the end
yeah i hope as well
atp i'm trying to lock in
as soon as i get these portals, i get to sending this research lmao
i was looking at how many weeks till March 31... it's honestly not many
yup
exactly 3 months.
we will know our fate.
march will probably be the new craziest month of the season so far
literally all my reaches release then
totally
except a few like washu, but barely
I just got my portal rn
What time did you submit?
Im gonna convince myself that Im not getting in anywhere good, so I don't have high hopes during March. I'll prob end up in CC.
same just got mine π
i am trying not to panic β¨
i submitted right before 7pm est
i see so it'll probably be another hour before i get mine
@tardy blaze @serene night is your checklist complete?
Iβll check rn
Yes
I'm slowly going more insane π€‘
Just wait an hour or two
π did you get an interview request yet?
Yeah
But it's all dependent by availability in your area which is very much lower as compared to something like the Bay Area
There are barely any Stanford alumni around here
Mine was from a guy in Bay Area lol
There was one in my local area but she didn't interview me
Did interview the kids from my school that also applied
here are my shorties
tbh i felt as if they ate when i submitted, now they feel mid asf
Itβs cute tho
That's amazing. I wrote some boring ass essay about writing for the stanford economic review
aw well thanks, i went the creative route on these π
idk I feel like stanford loves that just based on all the example essays I see
My only good paragraph in those stanford essays (removed attachment)
I like the plant and food theme
it's such a stupid theme π
the only thing "intellectual" was chess, which i mentioned in my learning essay
ehh it's whatever... they'll see way too many intellectual essay kids, and all the important stuff is in your common app
and then i talked about "apathy" for the societal issue and FDR's third election (ngl a dull short response) for the witnessed moment.
there isn't an extension.
I hope not lmao
they've never given one.
or I wouldn't be posting my essays
me neither β¨
makes sense lol I was wondering
yeah i'm deleting these soon, too. but i figured i'd just share them to see where others were at.
gauge how others responded to these unique questions
i wanted to make sure mine were extra niche just so that it's not really easy to replicate.
Somehow I managed to not answer this question at all in the way it was asked (removed attachment)
yeah idk it could have been better. But I didn't want to say some worn out shit like the moon landing or d-day
π that's so right
mine is lowk so boring
and then i answered the extracurricular one with a very interesting response
kinda personal but, just about being me β¨
wow my answers are pretty different
This is my EC essay. It's not too bad I think (removed attachment)
i think all of ours are, which i think is the beauty of stanford's essays. they really get a mixed bag
damn that's good
aw this is cute
π
my essays are...
LOL
eh
hopefully his not mine
because mine are... just kinda weird lowk
both of urs lol
i was about to go with the food route but ppl kept advising to not do food
ahaha
gg probably a bad idea
they get a lot of those... maybe.
food is super relatable though. Most AOs aren't gonna relate to AIME or coding competitions lol
at least i have a legit reason for saying food
apparently they do
because i actually do eat... the same thing, every day.
i thought id be being "cheeky" saying food but its more common than ppl expect
so it won't be "i'm excited to try their coffee" or something stupid.
i did no food π
LOL
lmfao
AIME
π
my intellectual essay is literally the worst topic to choose from
I'm not smart enough to really even know what AIME is. I've just seen it on reddit
(same)
lol
AMC -> AIME
AIME qual
ohhh
american math competition i see
if high enough score on AMC
yep
america's intellectual math egalitarians
pure guess
This one isn't good, but I again was scared of doing some overdone topic like political divison, income inequality, etc (removed attachment)
Interestinggg
Maybe they'll relate to the highspeed rail though, because it was supposed to go from san fran to LA
and it goes from like fucking bakersfield to modesto or some shit
That's so good. Best one of your stanford essays you've showed IMO
WAIT WHAT
I THOUGHT THAT WAS THE WEAKEST ONE
NO. It's a shame it's only 50 words. But that's just about the perfect answer
thank you for that π
i still highly doubt i will get into stanford
because of that stupid 4%
but i'm going for the lottery ticket
I mean with a 4% acceptance rate, and certainly even lower for RD, I have zero expectations
yeahhhh
But that's why I applied to 11 schools with no expectations
i wouldn't say it's his best one, i liked the other meaningful essay more personally
if i get in somehow, i will literally experience cardiac arrest from the sudden rush of adrenaline through my heart
the way this short one is written is quite good, but imo the idea is a tad bit generic
the 2% of those 4 are just stellar students who'd be juggling mit harvard, oxbridge, stanford acceptances at the same time
for normal kids its 1-2%
same, i personally like talking about hydrangeas lol
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It's a style thing. I stay away from the flowery/artsy writing style and I found the societal issue essay to be very direct
a very good critical response.
fair enough
personal pref then
it is indeed generic, but thankfully i didn't write about climate change or politics.
well in a sense i did politics, but not really
mine's the most generic then
A well done generic essay is better than a half-assed "unique" essay
You use very interesting language.
yeah i feel like it's hard to pinpoint a problem that snaps an AO's attention
yeah true
woah that's a long sentence π
I'm really sorry to do this to you but the grammar is incorrect afaik
but it's quite true.
good essay though
π
oh rlly?
oops
"changing" is a noun (gerund)
which means you don't have a parallel structure in your verb/noun form agreement
oh wait it's not a gerund
but something about that first part isn't correct grammatically but whatever
i love the word "co operate" oh gosh
okay frankly got no idea what you're talking about but yes π
It reads like two dependent clauses
i just made a yt video abt my passion, should I include it in creative portfolio?
for refrence, here it is: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jyF8-1m-9SE
Writing up my 200 words "why major" supplements deeply unsettled me.
There was no way the eternal pursuit of astrophysics could be summed in those word limits.
Here's my quick attempt to explain why the wonders of the universe have intrigued me for almost all my life.
Unless it's award-winning and will literally change a rejection to an immediate acceptance, no
not sure if it's just me but i hear a tick-tock in the background and it's driving me crazy π
well I made it last night, not getting awards in a giffy ofc
i dont hear it idk
No. You tell a good story, but I don't see an AO taking 4 minutes to follow the whole thing
I hear something like keyboard clicks
yeah they have fifteen minutes max to read your app, and they don't want to spend a third of it watching a pink screen and a man talk
It would make a great essay tho
great thoughts are shared, but it would likely reject you
sorry π
um okay, I'm not really looking to get a likely letter or anything but it can't harm if I do put it right?
it can do harm if they don't have enough time to read your essays
if you can't communicate who you are succinctly enough, then you are rejected.
(succinctly as in 15 minutes) -> which means looking through your academics, stats, personal essay, extracurriculars, lors, etc etc
so they will hardly have time to watch a video.
wont they look at optional materials at the last? I mean that only makes sense
i got portal
still waiting on 4 portals. Why can't every school be like columbia π
wait should we have written something like super intellectually engaging for stanford's moment in history prompt
ikrrrrrr
because i wrote about a fucking pink floyd concertπ
That's great
uh i wrote something very very dull
it was like super impactful historically or whatever
but still historical
Seriously. First of all, it's 50 words... no one cares that much. Just say the event and why you'd like to see
omg so good
That's great
that's beautiful and creative
ty
PSYCHEDELIC ROCK
with more words, you could have explained how and why it was revolutionary. But it shows a little about you and it's a historical event, no doubt. 350k is massive for a crowd
my meaning essay was about forming a rock band with a couple friends so like
i guess it connects??
Somewhat, definitely a theme there anyway
i know i hate that it was just 50 wordsπ
LOL
It isn't as well known as woodstock or live aid but maybe that makes it better
lmfao
still no portal π
Me either
how does stanford charge the highest application fee and take the longest to even download my application
Not to mention, they take the longest to even release decisions
april 1st π
Butttt, they start super late. September 26
Not really, I'd just like to get all my portals set up
I mean a little bit
I'm gonna be on vacation and I don't want to deal with this shit while I'm gone
Well if they donβt download, that means theres a problem
at least wait a couple days fr
you guys need to touch grass
I really really hope they download my app in the next hour
otherwise i will go insane.
Easier said than done.
yes I know
but im trying that and itβs working as of rn
i have this mindset honestly
low hopes
so not too disappointed
when decisions come
especially looking at the harvard lawsuit, my hopes have tanked.
in literally every school i applied to-- stanford, upenn, nyu, columbia, northwestern, even uw in my home state
I have low hopes, but I still want to get a good acceptance so I don't end up going to my state school even tho it's a damn good school
haha SAME
i want to go somewhere new and explore
chicago, pennsylvania, new york, heck even georgia
Worse, I live in the same fucking city as my state school
i applied to emory
π
ngl UW is a great school but i don't really wanna go
i've already been on campus a billion times
I was going to apply to emory but I missed their scholarship deadline
Me too, but the other UW
Not Wyoming btw
oh -> university of washington haha
Yup I'm in wisco
UNC is my #1 state school though
But oos is so brutal there
I'm probably more likely to get into duke lmao
gotcha
hahaha
didn't apply to duke though i considered it
i considered duke, dartmouth, and brown. ultimately decided against all of them idk why
probably just the time crunch
Fair. I thought about Dartmouth but I can't live in the middle of nowhere in New Hampshire. And brown grads don't make any money and don't place as well in finance
LOL
And I decided against Yale for carnegie mellon because I can't handle living in New haven
And don't get me started on Shithica
So did I
I got rejected from Carnegie π
U from Washington?
Yes, I live next to a bunch of rich old white people as a poor asian bus boy
I'm in Washington too
Oh that's so cool! I am going to visit UW tomorrow :))
(again, sigh)
for the monthly foster school of business yeoc immersive program
i'm so burnt out rip
I went there with a few friends spring break
it's a neat campus
Very lovely target
Ya obvi
my responses are definitely... a little different for the most part i think
a kid at my school has already been accepted though... so idk
there's like a dozen kids from my school applying π
There were 4 kids including myself
From my school
I was so stressed when they all got an interview invite a week after the deadline and I didn't 
That got in???
That applied
It has also been officially four hours and Stanford has not yet downloaded my app π
ohh i see, did they not get in?
Ya they didn't

haha

I doubt I will get in.
But we shall see. My short answers are all "written decently"
so hopefully that means something π
Darn !! Y'all got some pretty pumped up essays to present to AO's
FINALLY YES LET'S GOOOOO
my heart rate spiked to 140
All I've got is food, how I love to part of the "bubble" , my crazy atheist friend and Discord Discord Discord...smh
i spent 8 hours on my 8 essays
and i love them all
:D
That's a great feeling bruh... savor it now and when you get admitted π
Yea stanford has been my fav essays so far
for comparison, i've spent ~20 hours per most other colleges with the same types of questions
They actually have good prompts unlike every other school with their βwhy usβ goofy essays
i talk about my hydrangeas, my rhododendroms, my azaleas, my succulents...
for me, i really like caltech's and yale's
thought i liked stanny's but now they just seem too cliche
yeah i hate these essays
The stanford ones?
I read yours, i think yesterday, and they were super good
"super good" π
i can't anymore
even my DAD said they were good when usually he says "it's fine"
he told me this morning "william, i read your hydreangea essay. and i just wanted to tell you that you really are a beautiful writer"
That's the nicest thing he's said to me in my life lol
ripp yikes
yeah
my dad usually is very critical
indian moment
so for him to tell me something like that means a ton.
My dad is only good at writing financial statements π
literal mood
i showed my dad my college list in august
he just looked at harvard and laughed
like he hasn't laughed that hard ever
didnt even apply after that
:((
i wanted to say it won't be so funny if you were rich
but the i didn't cuz i wanna liveπ
fr
well hey always good to give stuff a try
my dinner convo tonight:
me: "Dad, would you be shocked if I got into Stanford, Harvard, UPenn, Columbia, or Northwestern?"
him: "It would be a very pleasant surprise."
π
π i sent it in several days before the deadline and a lot of people said it was "good" so I'm hoping that they were right
shooting for that seven percent lol
nahhh
No
I don't think they ever have.
very basic responses
i would have deleted the first sentence in answer four since it's just filler space. answer 5 was unique.
lemme share mine, ig i've shared the shorties already
good, but could probably improve with a little more personality shining through other than the very blatant quirk lots of kids try to show
Dear roommate
I'm hardly athletic, but I'm game for weekly jogs. I may lack the speed or endurance to keep up, but yelping with sore knees, Iβll try.
Getting into comedy as a 15-year-old wasn't exactly in-line with the age-restrictions of open mics. In the treachery of immaculate rejection from every club, it was my innate will to persevere and try that drove me to perform on streets, parks, and slums. So the next time you see me refusing to drop a mind-boggling course, youβd know why- itβs because I try.Hey, that rhymed!
When not exerting my utmost, youβd find me dismantling appliances. While the divine convenience of a microwave is considerably comforting, I, for one, am obligated to investigate the insides of it. Donβt worry though, I assemble it backβ¦mostly.
I don't believe Stanford has any, but if we get trapped together in an eternally boring lecture, I'd have plenty of ideas. During this 5-hour statistics class in sophomore year, I jotted the numbers of all the interstate vehicles I could make out from the flimsy windowsill of our class. Based on the direction they were headed, transportation trends of State-highways from geography textbook, and newfound knowledge of statistics, I managed to concoct an algorithm to roughly determine the traffic of a neighboring city. Google Maps narrowly beat me by 20 years, but hey, I try.
I wish I could elaborate upon my hobbies like card-stacking, or gardening cacti, but for now, I've a microwave to tend to...
eternally boring lecture π₯Ά
yep
divine convenience of a microwave
also yep, im a weird writer
I loved the dismantling electronics part
Same π
Like none of them related, but they all kinda fit in to paint my personality
I mean theyre not horrible, so if u have a strong application outside of essays id say u probably have a chance
Idk how good they actually are, but ik theyre not bad
Well ive read them, but nobody on this server would be able to tell u how strong ur essays are other than professional counselors
i'd say your essays were more overarching, there was a connecting theme for sure
mine are few.
My honors are like nhs and high honor roll π
π
I hated my gpa, but honors were better
my intellectual vitality essay is completely unrelated
but thank you :D
1% πͺ
damn fire
Nobody here can accurately chance u either
its ocsc camp but like yeah
tbh its funny how actual medal winners are applying and im jumping over a simple nomination
Bc a lot of it is luck
I only had one honour π
Id like to hope im in the why-are-you-even-applying-low bracket ππ
my favorite phrase in my chess essay is "I often played against myself" but that's about the only fun thing in there.
it has occurred to me that i've shared so many snippets of my app, someone patient enough to scroll through all the threads can impersonate me with 0 problems
I got a fee waiver π
nah nah people have common decency
Nah my hooks will carry me πππ
what junior is wasting their time checking a bunch of kids who just submitted their stanford essays
I think you will be rejected.
Β―_(γ)_/Β―
Straightforward comment.
I do not think you will make it to the Committee phase.
yeah me too and its so fun
like I legit just scroll down the list whenver im bored and apply to a obscure uni with no supps, i even got into a couple and i don't even remember applying lol
I mean realistically speaking, none of us have a chance lmao
Yeah I'm looking at my own and think I will be rejected, too.
I might actually do this bc ive dropped a bunch of my schools that had too many supps lmao
I did not connect my stuff well enough to my interested majors
I've decided to include that yt video
idk what they'll make of it but its legit and its me
for my IV supp, i talked about iron man, connected that to programmable matter, then to medicine, and then a theory I had, then back to iron man
iron man's nanotechnology
that sounded cool
and we have something like that in real life
programmable matter
very abstract though
I did something similar with my ps π³
i did NOT just go onto chance me to ask for people to evaluate me π
ππππ man, what the heck... I feel drawn in by the essay already
This sounds soooo cool holy shit
reading this thread gave me bad anxiety
getting #rejected ππ
it took me a good 20 minutes to get over the fact that id SUBMITTED my stanford app
harvard's a yolo submission but w the amount of time I'd spent writing my stanford supps i fell into the trap of becoming attached to a fucking building and a name
here's my short responses and roommate essay lol, the IV essay, I talked about a hurricane simulation I made and my presentation (+ how it made me excited ofc), and the other essay I talked about the algorithm I made as something meaningful
they did?
well i read at least 5-6 on this very thread
Lmao π
oh well, ik it wouldn't really be unique, just hope for ti to be well written
how were the rest in your opinion?
well yes, I was just saying how its incredibly prevalent
π
i wrote about something similar
but not the same ig
mine was more about people 'refusing to have difficult conversations'
Intellectual vitality
How much do ap scores matter for stanford? I applied as a biochem major but i didnt put in my ap bio score cuz i took it during the pandemic year and that shit was butt hard ππ i got a 3 but my chemistry course grades n everything were rly good
So im nervous
π
The the first long response p sure
I dont think ap scores matter as much as like sat or grades
But they could definitely be a boost
I didnt submit sat lmfao
ππ
Im screwed asf
Ohhh got it
i didnt submit either, ur fine
Would u feel comfortable sharing essays since youβve already gotten in? Im just curious π«£
which ones
Roommate and intellectual curiosity ππ
Whats ur major?
cs
doesnt matter what u say, cant even declare till sophomore year
u either get in or not lol
Omg rly
yeah
it doesnt ask for your major, if you recall
it just asks what your interests are
they want you to explore and have an open mind
i think i put cs, bio, econ as the 3 interests it asked for
Which align 1:1 to majors iirc
pretty good but i dont remember them asking me to report them on the app
i can send them in on my portal now tho
there isnt a specific building your applying to, ex USC viterbi, doesnt matter really
i started mine with "Picture this:" and described a scene. the challenge was indfference
literally the exact thing I wrote about π
wooo stanford for the win
im ngl i didnt know how important intlelectual vitality essay wwas
at all
kinda memed it π
Ohh yours are very very diff from mine lol
first one made me very uncomfortable π
Second one one was good, but I do think that the relationship was pretty irrelevant to the essay as a whole.
imo
Loved your fifty words.
I really like your essays!
I find it funny we both talked about Coupa cafe during our roommate essays
That is in fact, very funny haha
I appreciate that you like my essays, I hope the AOs do, too. Right now I'm reading them and I'm cringing, especially my IV one that I didn't post π
yeah you're not alone π my IV essay I think highlights a great experience, but idk if I elaborated enough
with that essay, you answered the prompt by highlighting that chess interested you and encouraged you to learn more, then you demonstrated that you wanted to learn more by watching youtube vids and more practice
it at least goes beyond the prompt in that fashion
Not too good though. I can imagine them just sighing and being like "um okay"
Β―_(γ)_/Β―
It will be a very pleasant surprise if I get in, especially because someone else from our school just got in.
So I think our chances for another kid will be even lower.
i think that serves better tbh, especially if they actually matriculated to stanford
they'll have a better taste of the students your school produces and might be more favored towards you
Yeah every year there's 1 student that goes.
But rarely 2.
Last year they accepted 2.
And the time before that was like in 2018
yeah i don't see it as a negative
wish my iv essay was more fluid tbh
its the **most **important essay for stanford
cause at the end of the day, they're looking at ppl who will work alongside professors
I had no clue it was the most important lmao
I absolutely memed it and talked about how I broke my computer and fixed it when i was 12 LMAO
But I talked about my research internship
Haha I think mine were quite seriously written
Honestly I really like all of the essays I wrote for Stanford ! Iβll send through my IV and room mate essays now :)
I just read yours I love them!
I appreciate how so many people like them I'm shocked tbh
Honestly there are so many people here who are really talented, I think it sucks how short the AOs spend looking thru apps. Itβs so dumb
Thank you β€οΈ haha it took a bunch of drafts to land on the right thing I wanted to talk about
be careful posting your essays
Why? I thought the deadline passed
uhh just to be safe
puts out a lot of ec information and stuff
that can be used to doxx
Oh so true
Thank you!
Anyone have an opinion on my IV essay, this was the worst one on my Stanford app
Yah I'm deleting all my stuff probably tomorrow and not releasing it again for that very reason.
yep
its a thread so its safer in here
but just in case
Although I wouldn't imagine why someone would want to doxx with so much energy.
people suck
its better to know that before you experience it
Yeah that's true
Do you want me to be nice or critical?
Honest
As my mama used to say, "better to be safe than sorry" and "stranger danger!" :P

prompt?
i think you spend too much time being descriptive rather than getting to the point
these essays are 250 and not 650 for a reason
personally, I dislike sentences that give little to no meaning
otherwise i think it's a fine essay
def could be edited but not horrible at all
It was really hard to follow the lines with the tangential information like "overpowered my spotify music" and other details thrown in there. Somewhat difficult to follow with so many prepositional phrases. I read more about the simulation itself than seeing emotion come off the page to show your excitement about it.
I like the idea, but I do think that it could have done a few more edits to be more refined and responsive to the prompt.
ive seen worse
The Stanford community is deeply curious and driven to learn in and out of the classroom. Reflect on an idea or experience that makes you genuinely excited about learning. (250 words)
ah nice
Of course, mine isn't much better.
Oh you didn't apply to Stanford??
also a lot of your guys' essays have comma misplacement
if youre applying to others make sure to get it edited/grammar checked
by other people
I think it could have had a bit more emphasis on your personal experience and feelings other than that itβs good
Yeah that's something I gleaned about it, it didn't have as much emotion as my other responses
Me and commas do not vibe I never have any idea when to use them live laugh love
Well, I checked mine with Grammarly premium π
And anything that is more of a splice is a stylistic choice but rip
lmao, i think commas are useful in that they can add flow
I just use them when I feel like I need a breather in the sentence LOLL
your essays have pretty good grammar ive seen
π omg please no
Oh okay because I was like... I'm a grammar freak when I write π
yeah the flow is good
I know the difference between "everyday" and "every day," "fewer" and "less than," etc π
Live laugh commas being a breath in the sentence
and i often correct my dad...
let me know if you want edits or anything theyre not useful since yall have submitted but im pretty honest
I totally would but itβs submitted - canβt do much now haha
Did you read my roommate essay? If so, how unique do you believe it is, comparatively?
lol that's not bad usually breathers are where there's supposed to be commas
youre probably right 75% of the time
true its all good
π₯² the mistakes we see after submitting
can u reply ping me to it?
Send it again? Or how far up was it
@dim wagon I believe it is the second snapshot.
These stress me out sooo much which is why I never re read essays after submitting
i think "unique" is a strong word, some kids go so far to be unique that it get's overly fake/showy, i would like an ideal essay to maintain some sincerity
I don't blame you.
Okay, well I definitely wanted to show my individuality (as a substitute for uniqueness). And through that, I tried to be as genuine as possible, almost as though I really was writing to my future roommate.
I've gotten mixed thoughts. Some thought it was "brilliant," others thought it was bland.
I guess the AO will determine the final verdict π
Your essay is definitely sincere and realistic as a note to roommate but Iβm not sure it shows something insanely βrevealingβ about you as other people may end up writing about
LOVE. the hamilton reference
If u need a roommate if we both end up at Stanfordβ¦. Iβm the one
I've watched the Hamilton broadway show like half a dozen times π
Looks like it's also a snapshot in a day of life at Stanford
Iβve seen it on the west end twice and twice on Disney plus and once on YouTube π©
π It was intended to be written that way...
Nice
OH YES... the original one
Yeah I like that becuase it letβs the AOs visualise you there
Yeah I didn't want to write some stupid thing about smelling roses or being addicted to minecraft or rubbing my nose.
Same
did anyone get an interview request yet?
I wanted to sound genuine but show a couple ways I could interact with the roommate
no i wishhh
do u know how stanford selects who getsvinterviews?
No, and I do not want to be interviewed.
all i got from your roomie essay was that you like food and plants, which i could probably find these qualities in other people, especially the combination of the two, you definitely could have used the 250 words to say some other stuff about yourself and let your honest quirks shine through. i think people tell you it's brilliant because it's written well, like the flow is nice and it is pretty sweet lmao. it's a well written essay but i think you really could have made it stronger with more unique qualities, the essay is supposed to be a large fit maker/differentiator. it's not a negative thing though, i think it's fine. imho i dislike roomie essays that reveal large amounts of unnecessary and uncomfortable quirks.
It is based on volunteer availability
i read your harvard one
i thought that was better
Oh v v interesting insight.
but you obviously had more room ahah
Agreed- Iβve read ones that are very unnecessarily open about certain things β¦ wouldnβt reccomend
I feel like they also might get caught off guard by how bland it is in a sense
real lol
people be like
my shit smells like strawberries
I used my stanford IV for harvard and added a paragraph or two
@dim wagon could you take a look at my roommate essay? It's the second image
They were honest quirks π but thank you
they were honest but not quirks
the ones in your harvard essay
like the smells/candles was a quirk
for example
sure
Tysm
Ohhh I see
I wrote about candles wha-
i forgot what i wrote tbh
Guys icl why is everyone mentioning the coupa cafΓ© and what is its importance π
I think they were defo honest but Iβm sure you have a lot more things that you may class as more of a quirk
I liked my roomie essay
I was just being my usual self, it was super sarcastic
My most fun essay
similar thing to doggo, the music score thing is pretty unique though, and what's with this cafe? π otherwise i think it's written fine, your semi-colon usage is a bit heavy though, on future essays make sure to limit that and use periods, it makes sentences unnecessarily choppy. i don't think anyone would talk about tik tok though π or at least watching it lmao - i don't know if that's a quirk either, i feel like a lot of people watch it but may not admit due to it's tendency to lead to procrastination. also you use a lot of adjectives, i think if you remove enough you have space for some more meaningful sentences. the good thing is that this essay felt real and sincere, you seem like a chill roommate, i like people with funny laughs haha.
bae will you judge mine
sure
im not qualified
i have not gotten in
but ill rip it apart
Omg you didnβt get a chance to rip mine
πππ tiktok was part of my life, it'd be a crime if I didn't, thx for your review
I low-key got scared abt the doxx thing and deleted them all even tho my roomie one only shows that Iβve been to prague π
you can send it again
OOOH
I LIKE THIS
very unique original format
only issue you use a lot of space for descriptiveness rather than more info about yourself
OMG SANI STAMP OF APPROVAL IS ALLLLL I NEED
you go into the technical aspects of being a roommate rather than your own interests, but it still reveals a lot of about you
well done
Yeah I can defo see that
REALLY strong conclusion
Yeah I do go into creative writing mode which has sometimes been a problem lol
haha it's fine
Thankyou!!!!!!!
it stands out in a good way
My last sentence low-key cringe but whatevs
well fuckπ
lmfao really π it's kinda ironic though because i got the most help with the first one
well too late i already submitted so hope the AO likes it ig 
hello my harvard of the west people
omg this is really good! i really love how you ended it
i love the one where you talk about worship in one of the short essay questions, you make it very powerful in such a limited amount of space
have emails with portal info been sent out yet?
Yes
But as long as you submitted your app on time, you're def gonna get your portal soon
dw :)
i didnβt apply, but iβm looking for a pdf of what the confirmation email with the portal info (with all personal info blacked out) looks like
you'll get an email titled Your Stanford Application
i would send a pic but im lowkey lazy to block all my personal info out
Dear Kushagra,
This email confirms we have received your 2023 Regular Decision application to Stanford!
The next step is to use the information below to log in to your Stanford portal, which is where you can check the receipt of required materials, update your application, and view your decision letter once decisions are released.
It takes time for materials to be matched to your application. Therefore, do not worry or contact the admission office if materials show as "Awaiting" and you know they have been sent. This is perfectly okay, even if it is past the deadline.
Please just log in to your portal regularly and continue to monitor your checklist. Once we process all materials, we will contact you if you are still missing a required material.
If you have questions regarding your submitted application, please review the information on our After Submitting Your Application page.
Thank you for applying to Stanford. We look forward to reviewing your application!
Best,
Mike Devlin
Director of Admission
hope it helps
godsend thanks.
shoutouts mike
is it possible to change our financial aid status after we've applied (aid to no aid)
just curious, how are you ed kids going for rd? (not mad, just asking cuz ed was binding, also congrats)
what
you got into dartmouth right?
no i got into stanford
the farm
oh fuck im dumb
nvm sorry
im not tryna go into the middle of the forest, ed to dartmouth is for the brave souls
yea, its so damn green, i saw a tree in your username and immediately though of dartmouth
congrats on stanford tho
stanford's mascot is a tree lol
yeah, ik, just slipped my mind
haha ok
yes
but at the end of the day, we all know Stanford doesn't exist
so lets move on with our lives
Maybe it only exists in my frame of mind
XD
That would also mean you guys only exist in my frame of mind

Stanford doesnβt exist itβs just a random farm in Ohio
yes, honestly so up in the air
u can get a great interviewer or an old head lol
tbh , i just need an interview to patch any holes left by my essays π i've had pretty liberal interviewers from other schools so far so I'm hoping that doesn't change
Yess love the interviewers that actually converse
Thank you! I appreciate it :-)
My personal thought :-)
vv true something to keep in mind
does stannie look at midyear reports
ya fr
Think so
it was some chill guy from san fran, wasnt even a local alumni
lool
guys should i update my app for course schedule change once i get it for the new semester?
to show im still taking rigorous classes n whatnot
did u not report it on the common app
yeah i did
but im dual enrolled at a college
so i get new schedule for the spring semester
the ones i reported are my fall semester courses
i mean if there is a change, id report
alrighty
and stanford doest look at freshmen grds
woooo
i need to recalculate my gpa then
didnt know that
That's awesome
Y'all don't think the essay sharing here is becoming a bit over the bar. I mean it's cool but it might make some applicants insecure and anxious ππ just saying
ππ
Valid point imo
maybe a risk of someone using your essays for another college as well
id suggest sharing essays via DMs
fr... you're right
i just discovered stanford fleet singers and omg they align so much with my ECs
I would've talked about it in the why stanford instead of a random stem club I partly liked, too bad i submitted already
XDxD
Just followed Stanford on Linkedin
hope this shows my commitment to the college and gets me in
for my stanford IV essay i wrote about an idea i had for protein folding
then tied it to potential societal impacts, what i did to explore/research, then tied it to stanford's options
hopefully they like me π
Yup i found out in freshmen year when i wasnt doing too well in math
Lmfaooo
Thats when it became my dream school fr
Wait were we supposed to connect to stanford
ππ
I jst talked about the reason i got into cancer research
N like how cool new cancer therapies r
nah I donβt think so
Iβve read essays of some accepted students and they didnβt connect it
Even I didnβt connect mine to Stanford
Youβre fine
π
Thank godππ
I dont think i mention stanford once other than the
Looking forward to experiencing one
nah it's not mandatory at all
and it was just a small part at the end for me
honestly fairs haha
the two stages of college essay grief:
(1) oh my goodness this is so long how am i gonna fill it up
(2) AAAAAAAAAARGH NOWHERE NEAR LONG ENOUGH GOTTA TRIM
The stanford apps were the funner ones
YES
ππ
no fr sameπ
My first CA draft was like 950 wordsπ
oh
my harvard ones took weeks to do
bc i'm an int'l and the uk system is completely different so i had noooo idea how to write
but after that i really got into the flow
UK
Ooo
No university of oxford typa stuff
i did columbia, stanford, MIT-tens, and my other choices in about two days each (one to write, one to edit/trim/polish)
Same omgggg the writing is what got me at the start it took me months to write my common app
frrr i applied so we'll see
my first one was BORING
i showed my american friend and they were like we love you but this sucks
i stan stannie so imma be a cali boy π
they were like
you're nice, your ECs are nice, i'm sure your interview would've gone well
My first essay was so shit omg my advisor was like this is such a depressing style you need to ramp up the American optimism
but they'll throw your file out reading the first sentence
Lmaoooo omg
nah can't lie i thought that first draft slapped so it hit me π
yeah same here
I messed up a good chunk of essays cuz i simply didnt know what I had to do
like for penn's thank you note I wound up writing an essay, often I'd ask chatgpt to write an essay just to see what its aboutπ
I fully wrote like 12 common app essay drafts
lmaooo i think my first draft was lowkey a satire on american values hence why they were like ;-; do NOT send this
lol π
ah, america, the plucky colonies that could
we're rooting for ya!
and that one old guy in vermont he's a g
I canβt remember what my first one was but I just remember I wrote it like you would write a personal statement and they were like what the fuck is this
yeah omds sameeeeeee pahaha are you a uk too
Howπ
as a non american person who's seen the insides of the comedy world,
i can confirm that some standup comics here use fox news and cnn for material;
Yeah Iβm in London lol - there r a bunch of us on the server
ayyy, sweet! i'm from southampton myself
don't suppose you attend westminster? π
uk gang rise up
My cousin does standup in LA but like sheβs a girl and an immigrant not going aaaaanywhere near Fox News lmao
Nah I got rejected for 6th form πππ
my first one was about how hated the color red, refused to use red pens, used green instead
then in some fictitious incident i had to use red, it had great results now im open to trying red pens
i tried to link it with getting out of one's comfort zone
rip but it's okay you're a slay
which others are you applying for
OMG I REMMEBER MY FIRST ONE it was a similar theme but I did it that I refused to learn how to read sheet music and just sat at the piano for hours learning songs from YouTube videos or listening to Spotify
So kind π thank tho
American optimism is mostly the white ppl
π
The american dreams and values are a lie
bernie is the real american dream
And the ppl who rly achieve those r the ppl who r rich and connected
and he's still more right than our green party
Were all jst pawns in the games of capitalism
Bruhhhh so many: UCLA, SD, SB and berk, then Harvard, Yale, Tulane, NEU, NU. And a few lacs
sick!! i was gonna do berk but had no time - regretful bc they're awesome - so i'm doing HYPSM + Columbia wooooo
hopefully i get into one
Our Green Party is almost communist π
realistically it's one or none icl
um yeah, i've been meaning to ask that @past jay or any other brit feel free to chime in
as such a deeply amalgamated and geographically linked cluster of people, how did yall wind up with 88878 accents?
Ayyyy r u applying Uk too? Iβm not lol
better than the tories π
REALLLL
LMFAOOO
yaaa oxford imperial ucl bath and warwick haha