low 16 avg, gimme some tips

[green flare]

U' F D2 B2 L2 U2 B2 U R B U2 R2 B R2 D2 F' L2 U2 F' R2
written recon soon as i screwed up somewhere and cant find where (soon is like 9-12ish hours (im eepy))

the solve is mega ass and probably shouldn't exist

[restive night]

Satisfiying sound

1. That jperm could have easily been recognized without looking back

2. Inefficient cross

With orange front white bottom you could have done: L’ D U L F’ to get both pieces at once

3. To save the blue-orange pair you could have done something like this (blue front): U’ F’ L F’ R’ D R D’