Looking for better ways

[unkempt quartz]

bruh :/

Scramble: F2 L2 U' B2 L2 B2 D' B2 U' R2 U' R' B' U2 F2 L' U2 F' U' R

z2 // inspection
D F D' R' F D' // white cross
R U R' U' R U R' // green-orange pair
U L U2 L2' U' L // red-green pair
R' U' R U2 y' L' U' L // blue-red pair
y' U2 L' U L U L' U' L U2 L' U' L // orange-blue pair
U' R U R' U' R' F R F' // OLL (OLL 33)
x' R U' R D2 R' U R D2 R2 F2 // PLL (Ab perm)

Time: 26.458

[wicked kite]

it's hard to critique without a video because we can't see things like look ahead and fingertricks, but the thing I'm noticing is that you aret inserting pairs into back slots

like if you had rotated the other way for the 3rd pair look ahead would be easier because you can easily see the last open slot

[unkempt quartz]

yea what i can say im terrible at lookahead

and dont know full oll (this one was easy but still had to recognize it for about half a second