I loved pretty much all of the proposal - too much to detail here.
Just one thing I’d feed back on. My view would be don’t go too hard on the hardcore sci-fi elements - it’s need to be accessible to millions of players.
For example ‘the corroded’ and ‘revenants’ with talk of malfunctioning AI and humanoids the like just felt less accessible to me.
Maybe others will view it differently but I guess I’m just saying be careful of going too hardcore with it