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storm mauve Sep 24, 2025, 4:20 PM

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cough

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so

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already at first load of the page i feel choked

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the hero section is too suffocating

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add more py to top and bottom of this thing

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scrolling down is fine

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it feels easy to skim

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then theres this

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use text-pretty

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solve the hanging words

tall sun Sep 24, 2025, 4:22 PM

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oh

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text-pretty, TIL

storm mauve Sep 24, 2025, 4:22 PM

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not all image has roudned corner

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its confusing if they want rounded or sharp corners

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this one they strive for rounded corner

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but then this one it slowly graduates to sharp corners

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aaaaand its all sharp corners

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this part feels the sharpest. its a bit uneasy in my eyes.

try using lighter color instead of darker color.

tall sun Sep 24, 2025, 4:24 PM

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yea I also noticed the last one

storm mauve Sep 24, 2025, 4:24 PM

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then its smooth again (??)

tall sun Sep 24, 2025, 4:24 PM

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lol

storm mauve Sep 24, 2025, 4:25 PM

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your pages have strong and big headers but then the download pages are all shy.

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doesn't match the previous brand image. should have a huge-ass text too to be bold

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now on to typography

tall sun Sep 24, 2025, 4:26 PM

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hmm

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makes sense

storm mauve Sep 24, 2025, 4:27 PM

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looks nice but id make the button have tighter tracking. this may be preference so ignore if needed.

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this whole section is weird. it should not show product picture

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show the different download OS link instead

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Not sure why the subpages have larger headings.

your home page hero should be the largest text.

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why is the hero title have smaller font

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dont be shy

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and put more large texts also in home page in the sections below

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example

tall sun Sep 24, 2025, 4:30 PM

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hmmm

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nice catch

storm mauve Sep 24, 2025, 4:31 PM

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its like the designer zoomed out too much when working in title hero then when working on to next section they zoomed in to fit view

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are you trying to be bold or minimalist? that part is confusing

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at the top ure trying to be big and bold then at the rest of the page u decided to be shy and be like supabase and ttry to be minimalist

tall sun Sep 24, 2025, 4:33 PM

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hmmm

storm mauve Sep 24, 2025, 4:35 PM

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big and bold like this

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then it devolves into this

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if u want to be loud and bold with the design then make it consistent

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like this

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https://blog.x.com/en_us/topics/events

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or this
https://www.figma.com/blog/

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or this
https://webflow.com/

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and i dont mean to increase every text's font size

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if u see webflow, u still see the normal 14-16px body texts

tall sun Sep 24, 2025, 4:38 PM

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their hero heading is big and bold and body text is normal

storm mauve Sep 24, 2025, 4:39 PM

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ye i mean add more header with large texts, with wild layout, not just plain centered

tall sun Sep 24, 2025, 4:39 PM

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unfortunately, I will have to go now prayge

storm mauve Sep 24, 2025, 4:39 PM

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kbye

tall sun Sep 24, 2025, 4:39 PM

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thanks for your review

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