winter venture
the in my ear manga part at ~11sec has a transition issue make on of them scale out dif also the "if we crash part and a lil before" is just a little still maybe make the graph less short add paning ingenerall its a pretty still edit but i think its on purpose? also the "on the dash" part the bg behind the font is kind of confusing at first hurts the eye also maybe work on ur shakes its missing them
untold haven