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fierce hearth Jun 13, 2023, 3:34 PM

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I know this isn’t really the right server but I’d say it’s close enough, are there any places for improvement on this short film? Mainly need some feedback in these categories:
SFX
Music
Audio balancing
Realness
Colors
Pacing
Plot
Camera Angles
Voice-overs
(ignore the spammed MSI logos, it’s for the MSI creator competition)
https://youtu.be/Shj2hyf8b-w

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Short Film Test - Cosmic Creation

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tepid pike Jun 13, 2023, 4:42 PM

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i will not be giving feedback as im a noob, however damn ur good man. just wondering if u offer any editing services

fierce hearth Jun 13, 2023, 4:58 PM

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I was thinking about it, maybe after I finish this?

latent tusk Jun 14, 2023, 9:04 AM

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Man it feels like a mess

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May be give them time to come

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Slowly peacefully let the viewer experience it

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