Need opinions

[turbid timber]

Need opinions on shakes, flow, transitions, cc, just any feedback would be appreciated! also please give me some effect ideas that can make this edit stand out more
also if you cant hear it well its because it has some mono audio so headphones are recommended

[turbid timber]

Now that I look at on my phone with full brightness I might need to change the cc

[fallen folio]

what software is this? AE>

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[turbid timber]

Ae yes

I changed the coloring already and fixing little mistakes I found

[turbid timber]

Changed the cc and fixed the flicker

It's the type of style

[tiny totem]

I love it! the changes def made it look better and complete 🤍

[turbid timber]

Thank you

[fathom folio]

@lusty geyser

[lusty geyser]

done

[turbid timber]

thank you