Criticism pls

[compact yoke]

Learning a new style and i need people to help me improve by giving me feedback!
https://youtu.be/AyU5c8_mOwc

[thorn pewter]

Add some movement to ur 1frames

[thorn pewter]

I think that your transitions and shakes are good, but your 1framers need improvement

[deep wadi]

i dont know but one frames really feels weird

annd my opinion dont use any blrs on this style it looks more weird

on here the warp is bad

and end of text is bad

6/10

[compact yoke]

aight

thanks

[thorn pewter]

Yw