#mixed two genres (128bpm to 140bpm). need feedback
slim sluice
dusk scarab
Hey yo I listened to the track and I have a fewthings you could try. First I think, overall the backing track that supports the vocals stays to monoton for to long. When you want to play this in a set to let the people chill a little then it’s nice but I think it could have more energy. I really love the first drop with the chopped up vocal that’s great. In the last drop you’re doing a speed up right? I think it’s a good Idea maybe try to do the speed up a bit more lowkey you know? So do it a bit slower. I like the idea of layering the vocals melody with a synth in the last drop. I’m just thinking of maybe try other synth sounds cause I think this one is a bit to harsh. Maybe try a plug or just a simple House Piano (could also work well for the chords and would be a nice variation I think)
slim sluice
thanks man for the feedback
red current
Good mix. Maybe the grit bass should be pushed when the chorus is on it would better match with the vocals. It would also brings more variation. try it
Vocoder sounds nice/original well done is that your voice?