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[south oriole]

https://untitled.stream/invite/RYsSUk0xc6tX1Vwa64Tfg
Heres the evolution of a current track im working on lmk what you think?

[winged prairie]

link doesnt work

[south oriole]

Yes it does i just used it!

[south oriole]

If you want send me your email and ill send it to you!

[winged prairie]

It works now just showed it wasnt available before

[south oriole]

Bet lmk what you think V4 is the latest version!

[winged prairie]

alrightt ill take a look in a little bit

@south oriole

also my email is [e-mail] if thats better

[south oriole]

Did it work?

[sullen rampart]

LET'S GO @south oriole - You just moved up to level 2! Who does this? 🔥🔥🔥

[south oriole]

https://soundcloud.com/athin-defuria/down-athinparker-v4-demo

I just got it up on the cloud

[winged prairie]

perfectt

im barely an artist so not much feedback i can give and i leave that to someone else. but what i will say is that i really like track i just find most of the sections like the drops sound very similar and somewhat repetitive

idk how to say it but yeah

[south oriole]

Alright ill take it! ngl i thought the same thing im still working on it have really automated much aswell with still figuring out the arrangement this is the secound song ive ever created and compared to my first its levels ahead of what i did previously if you find my earlier post from a couple weeks ago

[minor coyote]

Link doesn't work. Please use something like soundcloud or upload the file directly

[minor coyote]

Your track is super quiet and a lot of stuff is hard panned to the right. Is that the correct export?

There's barely anything in your track. I only hear a vocal, a kick, a hat loop and a pad

Add more drums, a bassline, etc

Nothing to give feedback on as there's hardly anything there

[south oriole]

which version did you listen too and nothing there was 4 different files from where the track started to now

[south oriole]

also if you scroll up theres a soundcloud link

[minor coyote]

I listened to your soundcloud link. Only one that worked

[south oriole]

and everything was panned? thats weird theres 2 versions on soundcloud

Ill go on there and see

[fast oar]

Its a good track tbh, but yes like Zovati said, add more drums and bassline.

[south oriole]

i got you