I would appreciate your honest opinion.

[misty coral]

Hi everyone, my name is Dali Scots. I would appreciate your honest opinion on my first track, which is 100% finished. Thank you very much for your time 🙂 https://soundcloud.com/daliscots/unrealease-master-2/s-nkHBrVLrEGu?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing&si=5e50feb77ae44e9586fda45bc91c8707

[loud prism]

Hi Dali,
Overal a nice track, but most of the transitions are dry, meaning they go from A to B straight away, wat makes that some parts ar cuts, so u would pay attention to transitioning to other parts of the track. For me there are some high frequencies that could get some EQ and vocal lead in 2nd drop need some processing also. As there is lots going in the highs and les in the mids, wat makes your lead sound not pop and blend with the vocals. Would def balance out your mix and beef some stuff up.

But that's my taste on the track ;).

Overall keep it going i would say.

[gloomy geyser]

LET'S GO @loud prism - You just moved up to level 4! Who does this? 🔥🔥🔥

[misty coral]

Hi Intotu, thank you so much for your kind words. I'll look into what you mentioned and fix it. Thanks again.

[loud prism]

No probs, that's why we are here for 😉

[deep coyote]

in my opinion, this track is fire. i love the bouncy aspect to it, and the vocals are pretty catchy too. yet i agree with dali scots, i think even a nice buildup could boost this track up from an 8 to a 9

[formal epoch]

The second build-up and drop reminds me of Darude - Sandstorm, I like it. 😄 You could try e.g. putting Endless Smile on the main track and automating the transitions to create tension. All in all, very solid - keep going 🙂

[wet radish]

Not a fan of the kick, transient is weird. Bass has too many highs in my opinion and is too loud/compressed. Add some reverb to your vocal and vocal FXs. Add a melody under the vocal. Really good for a first track honestly! But it's far from finished. Add some pads, pianos, lead sounds, melodies. Lots of things you can add. Your lead only comes in at the end of the track. It's cool to have a switch, but add some stuff before that

The silence at 2:52 is very sudden and too long. Then a lead comes in, it's super dry. Add some compression to that lead, some delay and some reverb

I would also lower the noise on that lead. It's causing a hard clicking transient, it's a little too loud

Here's a track I'm currently working on. To show you as an example, not every element you add has to be in the foreground. On version B I removed a pad and a lead that plays on the off beat. You can hear these 2 elements at 0:17 on version A

Compare these 2 versions. Version B is good, but it's lacking that movement in the background. It's the same with your track. You have a good starting point, but it's only your vocal with the bass and drums. It's lacking that movement and those atmospheric elements

[wet radish]

Overall pretty cool though. The notes of your bass are good, maybe a little variation on that moving up part though. I would definitely remove it on the breaks and keep it on the same low notes. Very dry track, main feedback is to give more things reverb (and delay, but mostly reverb)

[misty coral]

Thank you so much for your opinion 🙂 Yes, I know it has the flaws thanks to you all; I'm in the process of fixing it 😄

[misty coral]

I'm going to try what you recommended. Thanks for the help.