First Song - Critique Welcome!

[gentle parrot]

LET'S GO @lunar ingot - You just moved up to level 2! Who does this? 🔥🔥🔥

[lunar ingot]

Im such a student of the game... I binge tutorials 24/7. Im determined to get better and put out a single on a label

[faint steppe]

This is good, bit too fast for me but I'm an OAP boomer. I slowed it down and put a different vocal over it. it's just a sketch done quickly.

[lunar ingot]

Mannn! Thank you for taking the time to throw a vocal on it! @faint steppe that slower tempo is pretty slick

Who is it?? Maybe I can do a flip on it

brother the fact that you took the time to throw a new vocal on it... thank you so much

[faint steppe]

It's done very quickly, in real time in fact, I'd position it better but I just wanted to plant a seed for a more commercial track if you can get the vocal clearence ok

[lunar ingot]

vocals are all splice!

so we're gucci there but man, i just feel like i suck with my transitions

and my mixing

im trying my absolute best, binging tutorials 24/7, but trying to retain the high key concepts in mind. aka the mix should be good, only throw a limiter and maybe a sat on the master once the mix is proper

[faint steppe]

get the mix right 1st before thinking of mastering. EDM tips on YT has some good tips

[lunar ingot]

Oh yeah brotha i love his channel

a godsend for a newb like me lol

thats honestly how i learned how to mix

he's a fantastic teacher, and seeing james do remixes of track was a huge inspo.. and just binging chris lake' streams as well

[faint steppe]

I'm just a DJ, not a producer. mastering is a dark art and I'm no Harry Potter

Send me the stems so I can have a play, yes?

[lunar ingot]

Of course brotha! how? email? @faint steppe if so please send it over

[gentle parrot]

LET'S GO @lunar ingot - You just moved up to level 3! Who does this? 🔥🔥🔥

[lunar ingot]

or dm??