#911 - Original | 14 Year Old Producer | Feedback Please 🙌

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opaque lotus
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Here is one of my newest tracks called 911, Im 14 years old and i normally use Logic but as thats on apple in school, Im using FL Studio on my windows pc at home. Feedback appreciated!

agile stone
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Not a producer of any sort so I can’t give you actual executable assistance but your kick starting from 00:15 sounds, weird. I think you’ve layered it with another sound and it sounds too ‘separate’ if that makes sense.

opaque lotus
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Yeah I see where your getting that. It's clashing with the bass which now seems to yk

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Preciate the feedback 🙏

quick slate
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ya kick and bass groove need work. Would recommend finding a good reference track and copying its structure/arrangement and try and get your volume levels to match it

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Technical feedback:

main lead sound needs automation and change over time so its not always the same. you can add reverbs or delays to it as well

drums should always change and evolve over time as well

transition sounds like swooshes and risers help the flow between sections of the song