Piano house

[rancid robin]

Not sure where im going with this but just wanted some feedback, much appreciated!

[dark grove]

very old skool piano riff here 👍 obvs its in early mode so a bit tough to crit it at this stage. i like the bassline and piano riff. the piano comes in way too low though and the kick/bassline needs beefing up a lot but not too much because the tune isnt a banging-style, just needs more oompf. Yeh i would deffo work on this more. 👍

[rancid robin]

Thanks

Ill have another look tomorrow after work and tweak what you mentioned

[dark grove]

i would have a go at making it into a tune first before tweaking whats there. get the whole thing down as a full song, then repost that so we can see how it works in its entirety. early tweaking will lead you in to a dark place lol.

[rancid robin]

Haha ill take that in mind

[rancid robin]

@dark grove bit of an update on it so far

[dire coral]

Love the piano house! But personally this bassline is def darker and doesn't exactly match the upbeat feeling of the vocals and the piano. It's a mood clash imo