On My Mind - Remix | James Hype | Page 1

jaunty radish Jan 20, 2023, 12:21 PM

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new remix demo, i like where its going and wanna know what ur thoughts are 🙌❤️

jaunty radish Jan 20, 2023, 1:16 PM

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rustic bolt Jan 20, 2023, 9:32 PM

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yeh im liking where its going as well 🙂 nice prod as usual mate 👍 for me the vocal is a bit repetitive, after the 1st build perhaps just some bars without the vocal to let the tune breathe a bit. structure is there but im sure youre gonna add some more elements, i like the chord change as well. i would deffo use it more in the tune other than the breakdowns. are you gonna complete this? its a winner! 💯

jaunty radish Jan 20, 2023, 10:50 PM

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thanks alot bro 🙌

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im most likely gonna complete this

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but still yet to post something 😂

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gonna try and get some stuff out this year tho

rustic bolt Jan 20, 2023, 10:51 PM

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jaunty radish thanks alot bro 🙌

finishing tunes is harder than making them! 🙂

jaunty radish Jan 21, 2023, 1:56 AM

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rustic bolt finishing tunes is harder than making them! 🙂

ive got some finished tunes but im still yet to release them 😂

jaunty radish Jan 21, 2023, 2:56 AM

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new synths, fixed up some stuff, thinking about adding a piano on the breakdown maybe, made it a bit longer and most likely gonna change some of the vocal at some parts tho because i feel like it plays too much throughout the song.

torpid vector Jan 21, 2023, 10:00 PM

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Sounds really nice and clean, I'm digging this. I agree with the vocal being to repetitive. I think the main issue with this track are the drops that are too crowded both by the vocal playing over and over and by the synths that are overused. At 1:20 that synth shot is not needed in my opinion, the white noise you are using seems enough for a call & response with the main synth on the drop. Sometimes less is more.

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