#Any critiques / help please - be brutal / critical

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obsidian orchid
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unborn raptor
obsidian orchid
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  1. Ordering for new grad should be: Education > Work exp > Leadership Experience > Skills
  2. Add explicitly "Graduated: Jun 2024"
  3. Month abbreviations need to be consistent (make them all 3 letter abbrv)
  4. Remove periods (".") from end of each bullet point
  5. Heading name should be larger
  6. Resume file name should be First_Last_Resume_Year.PDF
  7. Add a line for relevant courses, e.g., Data Structures, Algorithms, Software Design, Distributed Systems, Operating Systems, or Concurrency, whichever ones you took
  8. You reuse the same action verbs (e.g, Built, Led, Deployed), use other interesting words such as Architected, Achieved, Spearheaded, Drove 0 to 1 development ...

Experience
Voodies
"Collaborated with CTO and CEO to develop food-centric social app with seamless front-end, and back-end integration using
Flutter and Supabase."

  • Mention impact (how many people used the app)
    Point 2: Mention how many restaurants
    Point 3: if your impact on the fix was minimal, remove the point, otherwise cut down to 1 line

Wont go into the others, hope this helps