#Any help with reviewing will be dearly appreciated

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opal cave
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A current sophomore seeking software and security engineering internships.

crude night
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For your education section, I would focus on making the honors and awards down to your top three and maybe removing scholarships since there’s so much going on there

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For languages, just remove the stuff in parenthesis as it’s not consistent with the rest of your stuff on that section

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I also don’t understand why you’re holding the company name for certifications

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For the security engineering fellow is all you did ctf?

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I wouldn’t focus so much on how hard the selection was and the scholarship for that one

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Like you can say selected one out of 50 but just say exactly what skills your developing

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And the rest of the of the bullets points elaborate on what you did

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Like just reading your last two experiences I think you should focus more on more concrete of what you’ve worked on