#300+ applications sent out, had 2 final rounds -- need any helpful advice!!

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shut vigil
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300+ applications sent out, had 2 final rounds -- need any helpful advice!!

wanton depot
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Simpler bullet points, but they gotta convey what you did and your impact--STAR method

wanton depot
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yes

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check this out

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"Worked as part of the experimentation team to lead statistical analysis on multiple A/B tests (10+ tickets) on our website, driving UI changes that increased the overall subscription conversion rates by 4%" - this should probably be split into two bullets ngl

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also you don't need to mention that you worked as part of the experimentation team

frosty harbor
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A lot cleaner, but I would try to make your second experience clearer in terms of business context (what was it for? was there any relevant impact?)

I have concerns about your technical strengths and direction but overall this isn’t in a bad state for an intern, albeit I would prob cut the Python libraries in your skills if they’re not asking for it

frosty harbor
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A lot of your projects and work seem more on the basic level - even w your Cupid dream project, your 3rd bullet doesn’t tell me anything about how this was relevant to your project lol

Again, it’s fine for an intern but I’d look to expand on this