#[2024 Grad] No interview calls, help much appreciated!
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I feel like u should remove lines like the 1st bullet of 2nd experience and put more like actual technical stuff you did. Same thing with the 3rd bullet of the top experience. Remove spearheaded its just a dead giveaway that some of this is AI generated no actual human ever uses that word. It kinda just sounds like ur saying experiences to just full up space.
That last bullet point in first experience is weird also, that metric u are using sounds weird "increasing efficiency of thje organization by 8 hours per deployment"
Idk I think u should spend some time deep thinking about what u did and follow Justins template, https://justinlin.substack.com/p/writing-resumes-to-get-into-faang
Alright got it. Let me work upon improving the flow of experience