#Looking for 2025 Internships, haven't had much success

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violet rock
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oh huh. rewriting it cause discord glitched.

projects ontop / experience on bottom.

No major issues.

can see article i spam to everyone else to expand ur projects, but no big issues with it

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u wanna do research? or?

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last year was just hard

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can read this for tips

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got it

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tbh i think projects are fine

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to just aim for internship directly

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Just last two years was shitty

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but this year seems hiring is uptick

violet rock
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it not impossible, at the very least id be aiming for bloomberg level

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at least in preparing for the top, ull always be ready haha

burnt oasis
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part1/2
@gilded belfry I have few comments; consider it only if makes sense for u, else discard it
also some of the comments if based on my feeling which i am not able to quantify. + most of the problem is verbosity.

#Computer Science Tutor
0. i think "Teacher Assistant" should be replaced as "Teaching Assistant"
1.i feel 1st line in Teacher Assistant is more cohesed than 1st line in Computer science tutor experience.

ie. "Assisted over 40+ students in an introductory computer science course, focusing on Java and fundamental concepts such as object-oriented programming, data structures and algorithms, and testing code"
is little better than "Conducted over 200+ hours of tutoring sessions and provided individualized assistance in computer science principles such as object-oriented programming and data structures, resulting in improved academic performance"

  1. "Created and delivered customized lesson plans to address individual student needs, enhancing their understanding and application of core computer science concepts through hands-on activities and real-world examples" very good sentence in Computer science tutor experience. other sentences feels like generic. i will suggest to remove the fillers "such as" and make it more definitive

#Teacher Assistant
3. filler found "such as"
4."Conducted office hours and workshops, teaching students to identify programming patterns, formulate algorithms, apply debugging techniques, and utilize design patterns" is the best sentence in this experience

#University Event Scheduler
5.React.js should be written as ReactJS as per lingo
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7."Implemented a MongoDB NoSQL database for efficient event data storage and real-time management" hints that you created mongoDB. i know you tried to convey that u used MongoDB, but i feel it doesnt need a standalone sentence for it. it can be included in the above sentence itself.

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@gilded belfry
8.in "Integrated Clerk's API for secure user authentication and Stripe's API for seamless payment processing, ensuring authorized access and smooth transactions"
words "secure", "seamless", "ensuring authorized access and smooth transactions"" are verbose, because these are implicit assumptions and is the general expectation.

  1. this experience should be reduced. from 3 pointers to 2 pointers.

  2. something like "Developed a fullstack MERN event scheduler for students at my university to create and manage 100's of events with features such as dynamic form handling and validation using React Hook form"

#Self-Driving Car
11.i get the impression that you might have missed some tech stack here. especially because you have mentioned Neural network; did u forget to mention any tech or did u implement NN in JS?

12."Utilized a multi-level neural network with randomized initial weights and biases to simulate human learning processes, enabling the self-driving car to adapt to dynamic driving conditions and vehicle control over time" this sentence is verbose, because this is essentially the definition of neural networks. especially since you have used "feed-forward neural network", its obvious its NN.

  1. this is very good sentence "Deployed ray-casting sensors for collision avoidance, enabling detection of obstacles in all directions and processing interactions with road boundaries and other vehicles to ensure comprehensive environmental awareness"

#Software Engineer Ticket-Flow
14. i feel "Leveraged MongoDB Atlas for ticket data management and an App Router for seamless application navigation" is mixing contexts, MongoDB atlas is database and App Router should be part of application

#TECHNICAL SKILLS
15.React should be written as ReactJS

#general
16.resume is at good shape, need minor tweeks. it also give the impression that you are looking more into front end