#1 YOE. Feedback Appreciated!

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wild kettle
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did you go to a top uni

feral tusk
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if you need space the test driven development bullet point is easy to drop

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I think on the projects you should specify what your individual contribution was (possibly in a second bullet point, or by trimming some of the stuff in the existing bullet point). When you don't list your individual work, it can read like you got carried by the team

feral tusk
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they seem to describe your day-to-day fine, but I guess they are light on the numbers. You could also improve the general details - "any client needs"/"product application" for instance are very vague and don't distinguish you from any other candidate

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Even if you dabbled in different parts of the project, hopefully there's a couple features that you could call "yours"? It's fine to have spread-out contributions, the concern is that without listing details it can read like you had no contributions.

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Especially given the wording that puts "in a team"/"on a team" very upfront for both projects - the bullets are describing how well the team did which is cool, but you should make it obvious how you contributed to that

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RE skills it looks fine to me, granted I'm not aware what more in depth would look like