sinful heron
Lots of weasel words. for example “…improving the user experience of the application.” What did u do exactly? How is the user experience better? These weasel words are present throughout your descriptions. Quantify your impact.
Overall good stuff, just quantify the impact of your work in your descriptions
Probably shouldn’t fib on metrics, but you can dig deeper in your search. For example you’re working with AWS at ur current internship. AWS console has metrics/monitoring information about your application if you click on the resource (eg network load balancer). Get some metrics from there
sinful heron
Looks good man good luck
Will be pretty strong after you tweak the rest of the bullets
broken hedge
