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gritty scroll
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Rising Junior aiming for 2025 SWE intern positions. Would love any and all feedback. Thank you <3

astral field
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Not enough crud

vapid relic
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you don't have an internship?

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dang

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unfortunate

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your resume seems decent

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how many applications did you put out last cycle

astral field
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Lowk i would change first experience to just software engineer

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Looks better

vapid relic
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yes that's the issue

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you should have done a couple hundreds

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would have gotten something

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for the summer

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i think it's fine isn't millennium pretty good

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it's easy to miss that you placed 1st at the datathon

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I see a lot of hackathon winners literally put "Winner" or something that indicates it very clearly in the title

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Idk exactly how they do it sometimes its like "x y z Winner" or "x y z - 1st Place"

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I'd argue you have enough cool shit on there to not need the waiter position. Outside of tech it'd probably be more appreciated but I think no one holds versatility and interpersonal skills on the resume to a high regard

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im sure there's been some ongoing debate on that part though so ill sit out of that discussion

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Also first position, if you're worried just change to Software Engineering Contractor or something

astral field
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^

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I think they'll see student in the title and judge it unfairly

astral field
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Software engineer first looks cooler

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I promise you there's people larping way harder than you putting "software engineering contractor" or even "software engineer"

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im sure they see harvard and mit on 5000 resumes from people who took one online course

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that's what your interests section conveys

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the main issue with the waiter position is you already have alimited amount of attention the recruiter is going to put into reading your resume,

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and given that its at the top

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do you want to expend that attention before they get down to citadel datathon winner

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or any of your other projects

vapid relic
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are you able to afford quitting your waiter job

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will you be in financial destitute if you quit your waiter job?

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personally if I were you I'd quit the waiter job and focus on interview prep

vapid relic
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still need to highlight 1st place citadel

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perhaps put awards right under education

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he doesn't have to since he has whitespace left

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but you do want to make your awards visible

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ya those 1st place distinctions really stand out now

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Goes hard

vapid relic
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put awards right after education

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or experience

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or not

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it doesn't really matter i guess since one can notice the awards immediately

spring pier
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can you analyse my data pls gah damn

quartz swan
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Damn first place citadel datathon

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What did you win

vapid relic
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how many teams did you compete against