#please review :)
regal charm
u don't need this
this is usually for business kids to have a statmenet of intent or something
wayyy too long
reduce to around 4 bullets
what is e-commerance intern?
also bullets are super weak
they don't really tell me anything about what you did
I'm 50 50 on removing this, but it depends on if u need stuff or not
too long
also you list tech you use
that you don't include in the above
keep it consistant
or remove it all together
what kind of algo?
how did it help
this just sounds like steps
for bullet 2-3
lmk if u have any questions
do you have any more work experience
projects you've done
are you apart of any clubs or orgs
etc
so you have more projects?
add them
that's fine
not the end of the world
put them all down
and then you can trim as you see fit
usuauly when you get past 4 bullets
you're going to lose people
no one wants to read an essay
the goal is to convey info in the shortest amount of space as you can
not to write an essay