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visual snow
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this looks solid man! a few nitpicks:

  1. education:
  • remove duplicate class big data analytics.
  1. 1st coop:
  • responsible for contributing features sounds a bit dragged out. maybe if ur responsible for the whole thing u can write spearheaded or just say implemented xyz,
  • participated sounds a bit weak, maybe you can write collaborated with the "xyz" unit.
  • is there any metrics u can add? adding some i think will make this look a lot better
  1. 3rd coop:
  • i think "occasionally" is a bit redundant. just say cultivated
odd tapir
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oh I didnt even notice the duplicate class!