#2024 NG (Constructive but nice please)

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magic comet
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feel like u could use a better word than 'racist restrictions' but could be wrong. also any reason you say "State-Of-The-Art"? and for ur second project, rather than saying "displaying strong x skills", show how u displayed it, which u sort of did in the second bullet

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take my advice with a grain of salt btw

vapid finch
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major spelling error

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remove "pivotal"

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Why is this capitalized

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don't say this, show don't tell

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major spelling error

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These classes literally have the word "Graduate" preceding them?

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change

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Change

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What makes this "research and publications" -- this sounds like a project

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zero metrics

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show don't tell

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vital tide
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just put the course name

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if its under masters im going to assume that you took it there

vital tide
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yo my ass was not reading mb

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but that is confusing?

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so are you doing a master and bach at the same time>?

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just put down the name