im just saying that you probably need to do a better job of censoring ur name lol
#would this be good for frosh programs (google step, explore, uberstar, meta) feedback?
alpine olive
Formatting - where'd the "EDUCATION" header go?
- Formatting with right margin
- These points are bordering on informal - I don't think resumes would be using second person ("our product") on their points
- Why is the third point filled with multiple sentences? Each point should be a sentence.
- Points one and two are meant to be your most important ones, yet they're both pretty weak
- "Responsible for programming the website from scratch" What kind of website? There's also better words that you can choose than "responsible" (eg. "Developed", etc.)
- "Partnered with product management to scale our products to tailor to an older audience" And? I'm not sure what you mean by scaling your product to tailor to an older audience... Like make it easier to use? What products are you talking about? You also use "partnered" again in the fourth point.
- Point 3 has absolutely nothing to do with what you did as an undergraduate teaching assistant
- Points 1 and 2 have quite some overlap (You "taught elementary school students math and science", and you "guided students to solve mathematical problems")
- Is there any "purpose" to these points? eg. You could reword point 2 to smth like "[...] to deepen understand and build a solid foundation of mathematics"
- Was the job title "Graphic Design Intern"? bc the points dont really sound like it...
- I'm not sure if "Contributed to the students' well being" is the best way to phrase point 1 because it's like... not really soemthing you can "quantify" for sure...
- What do you mean by highly functional?
- You are repeating yourself in point 1. "using React Native ..., utilizing NASA Rover API"
- "demonstrating strong user interest and engagement" - I'm not sure if this is your call to make.
ruby flicker
Bet this was so real