indigo nymph
first project-
- go in depth with what front-end and back-end you implemented, give details. 3rd bulletpoint (used mapbox api) is a good example
social media-
- i would personally rewrite jwt as json web token (jwt) since recruiters may not know from the top of their head what jwt is
personal portfolio-
- i dont think 2nd bullet point provides any new info, unless you wanted to maybe combine that and the 3rd bullet point. Idk this just sounds awk to me imo
mobile game-
- i would combine first + last bullet point since they're both just descriptions
- add more technical details- we know what it is but how did you do it?
game design paper-
- did you find anything novel? any insights? i would put that here. Just 1 bullet point throws me off
tech skills/coursework-
- combine college coursework with other coursework, u coudl just call it relevant coursework
math president-
- Try to find a better way to describe impact. 'explaining tricky math concepts' sounds plain to me. Do you have anything measurable? How did they improve?
overall i dont think it's bad. I noticed you do a lot of explaining what you did but not how you did it, which is crucial in these resume screens. You have all these tech skills listed below but you barely mention them in the projects. I think the full-stack social media app is the best section u have since it at least describes how you did created your project. I think all projects could benefit with more 'how' explanations. Look into action verbs too. Good luck 🙂