Working on something cool, but want to make it special with your help fam. What do you guys think could be improved in it.
https://dribbble.com/shots/18719129-PeerDrop-Onboarding-Screens
#Onboarding Screens
gray minnow
elder crane
I would increase the margin on the left to 20/24pt, it's a touch too close.
In the first illustration, it doesn't feel centered, I would move the illustration to the left.
In the left screen, I would wrap the text:
"Earn money
on the go" to prevent the orphan/whitespace issue.
Consider highlighting the middle screen since the comp is fairly symmetrical, or push the asymmetrical route and move screens to the right and cutoff the right-most screen.
And the "Skip" button doesn't seem to add anything here, so I would either make it into a bigger button with 'Continue/Next' or kill the text altogether.
On the last screen, I would remove the black dot in the lowest part of the illustration as it's almost cutoff anyway.