#I feel I’m missing something here but what?!

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signal meteor
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I’d have a look at using some shadow work to give a realistic glow affect to the sun, as it really shouts moon at the moment unfortunately, I’m not too sure what the use case is, but I could imagine it looking x100 better animated, with the clouds bobbing from right to left etc.

Loving the purple, but it does give a night feel to the entire photo. Superb mountains, very realistic yet minimalist at the same time!

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Just realised how old this post is 😂😂

toxic osprey
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Consider a version of this where the moon and clouds are removed. Nice and simple! It just might work

jagged wren
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Rule of thirds - add a bit more detailing to the mountain on the right. Maybe add a low poly house or something. Making sense? 👀

polar nebula
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I’ve been staring at this piece for a good 30 minutes, unsure what more I need to add to this piece to make it complete. I’m still working on the sun so it doesn’t look like the moon, but I want to add more depth and/or detail into the entire piece.

undone tundra
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idk maybe blur effects

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I feel like the clouds and the mountains are unmatched, one is simplified and the other with high detail.

toxic osprey
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Hollywood sign 🙂

coarse rivet
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The size of sun looks big to me. It should move a little right side.

wild verge
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Tough one, but I actually think the cloud style and mountain style meld well, but the sun doesn't feel like it's following the same style. I like how you're adding a different texture to the sun, but maybe add rays or something onto it that are in the same style as the clouds or mountains so things translate across the whole design?

urban musk
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@polar nebula I think the thing that's throwing me off the most is that the mountain range and telephone wires look realistic, but the clouds and sun? do not. Just my thoughts. Great work tho!