#I would love feedback on a case study presentation!

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young knot
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I've been working on a case study presentation on the project I'm working on in an internship, preparing for future interviews. I would love any feedback anyone can give me as I've never actually done a presentation! Thank you! https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1GvIf9-xC5JGFjlkuIHPogE-L41MS119C/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=114501420176287935181&rtpof=true&sd=true

void hearth
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This looks really nice and I like your use of the colors. One thing I noticed is that each section divider is assigned a different color on the left side

It made me wonder what it might look like if the top color bar within each ssection reflected the color used on the left side of the section divider since the top color bar isn't used for anything and more of a design element

You could also take the top color bar one step further and see what it looks like if it was a slight bit taller and you added the name of the section you're viewing somewhere within the bar, but maybe that becomes too much. Might be worth seeing how it looks though

prisma adder
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i like it

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it could be a bit more consistent but very detailed so well done

shadow ingot
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Suggestion
I want to understand how you understood the problem and came to the solution. Would like to suggest telling/building the story this way:

  1. What pain point are you solving for the user? This was covered on slide 9 - this can be early on before or after slide 4 (product intro)
  2. Why do you think your product solves it? This is slide 14 (What we included and why). Then mention AI or different parts of your prototype - specifically, how they solve the problem in point 1.
    Currently, slide 14 doesn’t actually say “why”, from the perspective of the user. Why do these features help the user? Where’s the research and data that determined what feature set you included?

Make this connected to the users you designed for - if pain points are unclear guidance and consistency - explain your problem-solving process surrounding this points. Like research shows XYZ helps in these two key areas, so our app designed around this with ABC methods to produce X benefits.
Can bring in competitive analysis here as well - what other AI based health apps have you analyzed, and how is your solution different?

  1. Usability and takeaways
    Make the Journey map larger. Make it just the top half if needed - if this section is on usability, make the chart usable for the viewer.
    Framing improvements as “ideas” is too soft. Would suggest using “Solution” or “Takeaway”.

The efforts are good, but would encourage you to make the case study more focused, intentional, and research-based if this is for future interviews.