Hey Barrie, I would like to give suggestions: -
- Stop using too many colours and fonts.
- Bright green under white text is not an accessible combination.
- Navigation menu text is too condensed, bold and small.
- Never use #000000 and #ffffff colours.
- Don't put unnecessary elements to make design modern.
- Maintain consistent spacing. Heading looks too condensed and there is very little line height. Let design breathe.
- Should use proper contrast to make elements relevant in the scene. I am pointing toward the image is blends with the background.
Hope this might help.