#Is this good composition?

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urban crest
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Hey Barrie, I would like to give suggestions: -

  1. Stop using too many colours and fonts.
  2. Bright green under white text is not an accessible combination.
  3. Navigation menu text is too condensed, bold and small.
  4. Never use #000000 and #ffffff colours.
  5. Don't put unnecessary elements to make design modern.
  6. Maintain consistent spacing. Heading looks too condensed and there is very little line height. Let design breathe.
  7. Should use proper contrast to make elements relevant in the scene. I am pointing toward the image is blends with the background.

Hope this might help.

magic ivy
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Pretty cool design bro but maybe tone down the vibrancy of the green and the pink definitely clashes with the red call to actions, too many colours and the body text isnt very legible