Brand new to this so take my thoughts with a grain of salt. Great choice of color and layout here (at least to my untrained eyes) ! I think you would communicate your self a more directly with a few less fonts. Its hard for me to determine what to direct my attention to because multiple display fonts are used. Also, the pink and white display font you used that says "fashion show" reads as "fashjon show". I think this is just because of the font choice but take a look at that. I hope this helps!
#Banner Design Concept for a Fashion Show – “Own The Ramp”
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