#My posters journey

1 messages · Page 1 of 1 (latest)

hazy moth
#

This is the first ("get lost in the melody") vs latest posters ("Levitate") i create,i have been practicing for over 6 month. just want to now tour opinion and feedback. how can i improve more?

sharp ruin
#

I'm not into poster design, but for me the "Levitate" Looks nice

#

I would use different font to make the desciprion more readable in poster "get lost in melody"

hazy moth
#

Thanks for the feedback

marsh dagger
#

It’s nice but the shadow for the shoe is off, if the light is coming from above it as it is in the photo the shadow will be directly under it

#

The shadow is acting like the light is casted from the top right but your main light source is right above the shoe, fix it and it’ll look good!

tall wolf
#

Referring to the levitate poster:

It's nice. Visually, the poster is interesting, but the goal isn't immediately clear to me. As vibrant as the color choice is, the contrast ends up suffering a bit as well since the legibility of the white on bright yellow gets a bit lost. Could play with it just a tiny bit more and you're there, I think.