Need Feedback on My Portfolio Landing Page! 🚀

[raw granite]

Hey everyone, I’m currently working on my personal portfolio website, and the landing page is almost done.

I’d love to get your thoughts on the landing page:

Does it feel too heavy or overwhelming?
Are there any sections that seem unnecessary or anything you feel is missing?
Any suggestions for improvements or additions?

I’m open to all kinds of feedback, whether it’s about design, usability, or even small details. Thanks in advance for helping me refine it! 😊

Portfolio Link: kochlauxd.framer.website

[obsidian rapids]

I like the overall look a lot and am viewing on mobile. In general the layout and transitions are great.

Some suggestions:

• Some copywriting is needed where things don’t quite make sense. For example “middle UX/ui designer” isn’t a phrase that is quite complete. Similarly, “I have a proven track record of my own product” isn’t the right phrasing.
• I like your open to freelancing indicator in the hero, but it’s competing with the main button. Try modifying order or spacing.
• the animation of the large block of background text is odd because it’s like you’re simulating typing all the lines of text at once
• the headers with a fade on the right are odd because it’s like the last word is unimportant
• I wouldn’t say “pixel perfect websites” under webflow because it doesn’t speak to responsiveness.
• some elements in the footer are overlapping in the smallest viewport size
• The green sample image is nice, but I wouldn’t use the phones on rocks over and over. Only use that style if it makes contextual sense for the project (ex: a CrossFit site)
• I assume I’ll eventually be able to click into each project for more details or more images.

Hope that helps!!!