#Skincare Website Design

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heady delta
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It's simple and works. I'm not sure about the drop caps (stylized first letter) everywhere. It doesn't make me feel more beautiful or elegant. At least not in this format where the stylized letter is the same size or smaller than the rest of the word

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It also looks slapped onto the brand name instead of blended in

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steady berry
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I agree with that @heady delta has mentioned that it does not give the feeling of beauty or elegance.

Your overall website @unborn python looks simple and like the photographs you picked for some of the sections.

Critique for Skincare Website:

  1. Nav lines
  • Practical for Phone Screen
  • Needs to be the same length from the one that I circled in blue in the attachment
  1. The thin starry circle could be reduced
  • Add the slogan inside the decorative circle

  1. Instead of an oval shape why dont you create a rectangular bar

  2. Bottom Nav

  • Have the "Home" , "About" , "Catalogue" and the rest on one line

  • Replace the written social media items with their icons

I was going to give you a few more points but I wanted you to focus on these points that I mentioned above

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unborn python
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@steady berry @heady delta Thank you so much for your feedback,❤️ I will fix it.